Oh, this cannot be good for Tara's gf. Excellent story and I am so glad to see Tara as the main character for once. I think the SOB Immortal is about to be introduced to the fires of Hell for a very long time and real soon. He is going to be so surprised when Tara throws down her sword and then roasts his butt with a fireball. Or whatever you decide. I am enjoying your story a lot and look forward to more.
Comments from author:
It's never a good thing to push people past their limits. As for the SOB immortal there are worse things than death.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Dec 07] • Not Rated
I can't wait for you to update this story, your really have me intrigued.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Review By [aerialla] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Whiskey for the Dead" from aerialla
Review:
Oh how could you do that to Methos. *sob sob* pretty good so far and depite you killing off Methos in Chapt 2 I am enjoying the story and I can't wait to see what you have planned for Duncan and Tara. I think this is going to be a fun and very enjoyable ride.
Review By [aerialla] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
You ever notice that Amanda and Anya have alot in common? Just a thought story is good needs more chapters and more depth. I will be here to read it as you write it.
Later and Love Bunney
Comments from author:
Yeah some of them make a touch more sense when you've read the rest. :)
They do have a bit in common.
I will probably do some more on the story this week and see if I can get another chapter or two out.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unpleasant Truths" from NaiveGhost
Review:
Interesting combination/story line.
Keep writing!
;-)
Comments from author:
I'm a fan of the Highlander stories. I thought Tara got a rotten deal. I have been a fan of crossovers a long time. I just wish it could happen more than it does in regular works. But I guess that's why we write our own little worlds.
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
ahah, very good, i hadn't thought about the mental trauma possibility :-)
Comments from author:
It's a bit of several things. But she lost Willow to Willow's magic, then lost her again when she woke up. I remember things going wrong with Willow because of mental trauma. I figure there was always a chance that such things could happen. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Many of the best stories in the BTVS/HL universe have Methos in them, a few of them have Tara/Methos relationship going on. The death of this HL regular was abrupt and didn't seem to have any reason for it to happen except to give Duncan and Tara time to get acquainted. Methos was out of practice as I recall the series portrayed one time or another and a very good swordsman could have bested him. It only takes one time to screwup in any risky endeavor to be fatal. Except in Television. I forgot to make my appreciation of the story to you, so I'll do it now. Are the scoobies to be out of the story completely? Or are the dopplegangers going to make an appearance? Perhaps Methos was lulled into death by a earnest and cheerful face? Mwaha haa!
Comments from author:
I'm a large Methos fan. He is probably my favorite character. Still you can't be lucky all the time, and even the most skilled can have a run of bad luck. While I'm not a large fan of Tara or Willow being straight in stories, I've read a few really good Methos/Tara stories. If things had worked differently in my story and I was a better author I might have given Tara/Methos a shot.
As for the scoobies, one or two of them might make an appearance later. And no there are no dopplegangers at this moment.
I'm glad you took the time to review.
Review By [PATM] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Interesting premise. I have a few points of critique to offer:
-Tara would, I think, be a little more distraught at the fact that not only could she not tell everyone, she can't even find then to tell 'em that she's alive, especially Willow. Perhaps a little more angst is in order there.
-Duncan's surname is spelled, 'Macleod'. Thought I'd point that out before the hordes of angry Scots descended upon you. ;-)
-The news about Methos was kind of abrupt; perhaps some kind of flashback could be given for background there. It'd take someone of extreme sneakiness to actually find the ol' boy, much less kill him.
That's all I have for now, anything else I could come up with, may yet be answered as the story unfolds.
Comments from author:
Damn for the Macleod I just pulled it off the web site, I must have picked the wrong one. She was distraught but it's been a while. I should probably have done more with that.
The news about Methos was rather abrupt. Sadly there was no one there that got a good picture of what happened. So tossing in a flashback wouldn't work that well for that event at this time. I will probably toss in a flashback later. I have to agree that it would take someone of extreme sneakiness and great skill to kill him.
Thanks for the review sighting issues. I'll work on the ones I can and see how the rest play out.