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Review of chapter "Ends and Beginnings" from AllenPitt
Review:
Congrats on completing the fic, and well, too! (Lots of writers start with a great idea then kind of 'trail off' ie don't know how to finish it. Hm...possible sequel in which Willow finds out about Tara? I think Willow would come running if she did...
I liked the part about there being real consequences to breaking the 'no fighting on holy ground' rule; that part was always the weakest part of the "Highlander" mythology... the "every immortal respects it" thing didn't really explain it.
* Have you considered crossing Buffy -verse with "Heroes"? Throw in Veronica Mars while you're at it( ie "why is there a VM lookalike running around with powers") --not to mention Trina / Willow, Cordelia / Kendall and so on---it could be fun.
Comments from author:
I've also read a few stories that started off with a great idea but somewhere along the line lost it. I was hoping to finish the story before I lost my way in what I wanted to say. I never really liked the whole everyone always respects holy ground crap either. We have ancient immortals running around that predate Christianity by thousands of years. We have new Christians that wouldn't even recognize ancient holy ground unless they could feel it. Unless somehow there was something very bad that happened like a random catastrophe or something I don't see people sticking to that whole no fighting thing.

As for my heroes cross I might some day do a sequel to this story. It isn't going to be for a while but I might some day. I wouldn't hold your breath though. :) As for Willow finding out about Tara still being alive.. I don't think Buffy is mean enough to say something intentionally. Tara is dead in Willow's world, to find out that she is just out of reach would be cruel. I'm not saying she doesn't ever find out but it will be a while.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [29 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Old friends return" from CPTSkip
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Oh my! And your plot was running so linearly. Lol! I have absolutely no fracking idea of what is going on, but I am still enjoying your story a whole lot. But please update quickly as my mind boggled so often as I read this latest update, I think I hurt myself. Lol! Willow and Dawn I can easily see. But Willow/Dawn and Hermione? Kinky Willow, kinky. Lol!
Comments from author:
Just a little kinky, my other story explains that pairing a bit.

As for the plot yes it was going along nicely. The fact that Buffy and Adam came back was part of my other story for a long time. So I had to work them in. The best way to do that was to kill another immortal on holy ground. So things got slightly more complecated than they used to be.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Old friends return" from PATM
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This Claire apparently was a pre immortal eh? When did she die? Concerning Chapter 8 the soon to be shorter retard gasps "Holy ground", it looks as if the dead guy becomes the narrator to his own demise when the end quotes show up at the end of the sentence. Buffy and Adam show up
from some place and some time else is similar to the appearance of Dawn (whom I love)(whom?)
in the 5th season and I thought that was brilliant! I like it here also but you need more back story,
that is, write another story about that okay? Funny yeah? Keep going, too long between updates.
Comments from author:
They showed up because they caught a portal. As for back story most of my stories are connected and serve as back story. I'm going to try to update more often.
Review By [PATM] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Old friends return" from AllenPitt
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curiouser and curiouser. Hermione?! That complicates B's world a lot... And... wow, what a bar tab Methos now has. One can only wonder how Tara will react to that little 'tried to destroy the world' thing....
Comments from author:
Please remember that Adam was stingy about certain things, he would react the same for a bar tab of 20 dollars as for 1000 or so. As far as Tara goes and the whole Willow ending the world... Well that's for next time.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A pissed witch" from Mcspender
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Oh Hell, Oh Tara, what in blazes have you done =S?.

Or her defense, it could be said that the other guy desecrated the church first, but the last time that a fight in Holy Ground happened, a little volcano called Vesuvius took Pompeii out of the map.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Yeah well bad things, and all of that come from cutting off heads on holy ground. I will get started working on the next chapter soon, I hope.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A pissed witch" from AllenPitt
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actually... Duncan & company will be very upset with her for killing the guy on holy ground. Should have floated him out the door first. Violated the prime rule of immortals...now if the story gets out, she could be in major trouble.....
But the 'she can do magic' thing will get out and cause much bigger trouble....heh---so was this the guy that killed Methos? If so she's getting a LOT of power out of this--
Comments from author:
Yeah killing an immortal on holy ground is bad. But he gave her a good reason too. While Tara would probably be the first to consider places sacred, there are times when you ignore that in favor of not having witnesses to your crimes. Or just getting the evil bastard dead. This is not the immortal that "killed" Methos. This is just a flea-spec immortal that happened to like hunting new immortals and picked the wrong one. As for news getting out on the magic.. I'm sure it will happen sooner or later. :)
Those pesky watchers and all that.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A pissed witch" from Bunney
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Hmm it isn't holy ground if he has desicrated it right??? This getting good....so get back to work! :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Yeah well bad things happen on holy ground when you cut off heads.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A dark soul" from Bunney
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UH oh! Does this mean we are actually going to see the girl get angry??? I always wondered if it was possible, but she died to soon!

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
You might at that. I'm glad you took the time to review.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A dark soul" from lorwen
Review:
Good.
Solid.
I like it.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A dark soul" from PATM
Review:
Oh crap! You can't take a breath now! I think this is goin' to hurt.
Review By [PATM] • Date [18 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A dark soul" from CPTSkip
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Oh, this cannot be good for Tara's gf. Excellent story and I am so glad to see Tara as the main character for once. I think the SOB Immortal is about to be introduced to the fires of Hell for a very long time and real soon. He is going to be so surprised when Tara throws down her sword and then roasts his butt with a fireball. Or whatever you decide. I am enjoying your story a lot and look forward to more.
Comments from author:
It's never a good thing to push people past their limits. As for the SOB immortal there are worse things than death.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A dark soul" from aerialla
Review:
I can't wait for you to update this story, your really have me intrigued.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Review By [aerialla] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Whiskey for the Dead" from aerialla
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Oh how could you do that to Methos. *sob sob* pretty good so far and depite you killing off Methos in Chapt 2 I am enjoying the story and I can't wait to see what you have planned for Duncan and Tara. I think this is going to be a fun and very enjoyable ride.
Review By [aerialla] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unpleasant Truths" from Bunney
Review:
You ever notice that Amanda and Anya have alot in common? Just a thought story is good needs more chapters and more depth. I will be here to read it as you write it.

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Yeah some of them make a touch more sense when you've read the rest. :)

They do have a bit in common.

I will probably do some more on the story this week and see if I can get another chapter or two out.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unpleasant Truths" from lorwen
Review:
Story is awesome.
Need more story.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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