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Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Harry
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So, Xander just got the word that a member of the Uchia clan was the one who set things in motion for the takeover of Sunnydale. Looks like those plans are about to hit a MAJOR wrinkle, if Kakashia and Sassuke are making arrangements to bring in reinforcements!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Harry
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Time to kick the training into serious level! Time to figure out how to create and use the Chidori, the 1000 birds. It may be the only thing that can stop this group.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Harry
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Oh MY GIDDY AUNT! Oorochimaru's little group, Sunndyale Version, just arrived. Time to go to plan B, and be prepared for trouble. BIG TROUBLE!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Harry
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Well, the hypnosis ability of the Sharrigan seems to be working well. And the transformation Juitsu works well. Lets just see if this works, and what, if anything, the other group of villains out there have in mind for the future.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Harry
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I have to agree with Jenny on this: Forget about mind control or illusions. Even with the power of the Shurrigan, it may not work. Better to try and figure something else out, like perhaps Sassuke special attack of 1000 birds the Chidori!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Harry
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I can see both sides on this situation. I can understand why Xander feels the way he does: He has these skills and he is hardly using them except in small ways. But Buffy is right in that to take down the Judge is going to take a team effort! Now, lets make sure that in doing this, that Angel does NOT turn into Angelus!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Harry
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Xander, your use of the jujitsu's just made you a serious enemy in Spike. Be prepared for the order and/or Spike to be coming after YOU!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Harry
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I have to admit, seeing Xander use Sassuke's fire Jujitsu was a lot more satisfying than using Glue to take out Bug Assassin. And if Willow ever DID get into Ninjitsu the way she did with magic, SHE WOULD be dangerous! A combo of Ninja and Witch would be VERY SCARY!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Harry
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So, Xander is unleashing Shadow Clones. And, while Sassuke may not have been good at creating them, he should have been able to at least create them, even if they aren't as good as Naruto's.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
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Very nice. I like the fact that Xander is willing to step up and train the gang. And with his techniques, it will make it harder for the order to kill Buffy.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
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I had no trouble with the amount of talking in this chapter. It helped to explain things that even I, a regular watcher of the show, and one who has started reading the Manga, to understand. I also think that Giles should have Willow start doing some online searching to see if she can help find anything that might help out as well, since Giles doesn't do well with computers. Maybe bring Ms. Calender in on it as well.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
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BRAVO! Well done! You had Xander do what few have ever been able to do against Buffy: FRUSTRATE HER! And that is saying something. But, what about this group that was also changed during the Halloween episode? What plans to they have, and how do they effect Arrochimaru's activities in the original world?
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
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Buffy, be prepared for something that rarely happens to you: You are about to get BEAT! With Sassukes abilities, you are going to end up on the short end of the stick!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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OH MAN! While Ripper may have stopped the spell, it looks like some of the Sound Ninja of Oorochimaru have come through as well, or members of the gang that he used to associate with. Either way, it spells BIG TIME trouble!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
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Well Sasuke/Xander may be starting to figure things out, but I DON'T like the fact that Sasuke is thinking about taking Oorochimaru up on his offer. What that snake REALLY wants is your body and its genetic potential! Now, concentrate on stopping this spell once and for all!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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