Like the look of it. Looks promising. You did well Presenting the start.
-[ The premise is not an unfamiliar one. However, you showed it instead of told it. For which I thank you. You let us see the changes partly from the viewpoint of the characters. You didn't just say so-and-so were this or they did that. You gave each detail associated with the characters that slight personal touch. ]-
Comments from author:
It starts out easy. But the long road is scary. Lets hope for the best.
I suck at haiku. Oh well. Thanks for the sentiment. Will try to keep it up.
hehe, one-bathroom houses with two kids who have school at different times = not cool. poor buffy.
VERY interesting start; can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
I always wondered, is the house at Revello Dr a 1-bath? It was never really shown...and it must have been absolutely horrible in S7 with all of the girls at the house.
*shudders*
Glad you like it. Hop eto not disappoint with future installments.
Well, this is certainly a different way of resetting things than I've seen done previously.
Very interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you have planned here.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have many ideas for the fic that would fall into the realm of 'different'. It only sucks that it may take a while to get to the really good parts. Oh well, have to start somewhere.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Not Rated