Great story you have written.

I hope you get inspired to add a new story to this series.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

::eyes the hoards nervously:: There's actually three more stories planned, but they are going to be written in a different style and have a shift in focus. None of them are started yet however, since I have other wips that people will kill me if I don't finish them soon.

This was a great story. ^_^

An Awesome storyline but I was hoping for MiniJack.

Awww...! Not ready for it to end, yet!

Still, that's a great note to go out on -- right about at the end of season 8 of SG1, so you don't have to specify or speculate on what happened after Jack O'Neill left the series (and I'm thinking this trip to Cleveland was in lieu of the trip to Jack's cabin for the whole team after the time-travel two-parter at the end of that season?).

If you're ever tempted to write another story in this universe, though, let me strongly encourage you to do so. I'd love to read more about the O'Neills and their extended SG1/Slayer-Watcher family.

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

The trip to Cleveland is in addition to the trip the cabin. On the way back to Colorado, Jack books them a three day stop in Cleveland.

Aaah....this isn't really the end....is it?

I was glad to get more glimpses of Jack & Xanders relationship and I'm sorry to see the story come to an end. You definitely ended it showing they've both found a thread of hope and peace they need in their lives to carry them through the more prevalent dark spots.

I really enjoyed this. I would love to see more in this verse, but this is also a good place to end it.

That was good, beautiful and throughly enjoyable to read! Thank you for you awesome work!
Ryen

*Standing ovation*
A good place to end a wonderful tale.

I loved this chapter, it was beautiful and touching.

Even I was going 'Aw' at the end. :)

The end?! *pout*
Good place to stop, and a good ending. Very well done. I look forward to reading more of your writings!

*Sobbing* It's over! Not fair, I love your universe so much! Well needless to say you know I liked it. But hey the way I see it, there's another year just waiting to be written...Xander might have been joking about Slayer Marines, but I don't know about you but the Atlantis expedition might need some back up. Anyways can't wait for you to write a third set.

~Angela

That was AMAZING!! I wish there were more in this series-you've written it so damn well.

I love the interaction with Jack and the girls-and how fatherly he was, and how he bolstered Andrew up during their latest crisis. Just wonderful stuff. I' m sad to see it go.


*weeps*

*peers slyly up* Gonna write more? Anything?

That was really good. Are you going to write more stories in this series? Please!!!

Always glad to find any new snippet of this reality; its one of my favorites. Thanks for the ride. Always up for a return visit too should the muse strike!!
Great piece of work.