Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Conception by Conspiracy

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Plus or Minus" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Interesting start.
Curious to see where it goes.

But how are you getting around the lust spell at the frat house with B & Riley?
If they weren't the ones trapped in the spell, then you need to mention who was.
Comments from author:
I'm just going with - it never happened. That episode always creeped me out. I've added a tiny authors note to address this.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plus or Minus" from starchild
Review:
I was actually wondering how you were going to write Riley out of the picture and then I read you were going with the two of them not having sex. That leaves out the episode of the frat house haunted by the repressed children who were fueling their issues with Buffy and Riley's sexual energy along with all the other not as explicit references to them having sex. Also, the whole poop-head thing? Something said amongst friends and not how she'd be likely to talk to Giles.

That all being said, I like the premise of the story and am looking forward to seeing you develop it.
Comments from author:
I went back and reread the poop head references after you and Joehundredaire pointed that out. I agree so I've gone back and edited it. As for Riley and sex. I've just chosen to create a world where that didn't happen. I was never a fan of the Buffy Riley relationship. I believe on some sites it's referred to as Biley and that about sums it up for me. Thanks for reading and I hope that you continue to enjoy the story.
Review By [starchild] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plus or Minus" from ginnia
Review:
I am glad that someone accepted this challenge because this story sounds like it will be a good one. I am hoping the dad will be Teal'c instead of Jack and Daniel. One, Jack and Daniel are always used. Two, it will make since that they will mix Teal'c's DNA with Buffy's hoping they will create a test tube baby that will be born a warrior with special abilities. They would probably choice to make the child a girl and scrap any batch that doesn't meet their qualifications hoping that a girl child will have more chance of inheriting something from her mother. I imagine the girl will have some of her mom's ability and the girl can have her mom's enhanced senses, natural ability as a warrior and in handling any weapon she touches, and maybe better speed and reflexes then normal people, without the supernatural strength and prophetic dreams only slayers have. You can decided if the kid will have the genetic problem that Jaffa kids need to have a symbiote when they reach puberty or they will die or the kid can have her mom's immune system and healing. I really hope you update soon because I am curious about who the dad is, how the parents find out the truth, and what happens after the kid is born.
Review By [ginnia] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plus or Minus" from djhardim
Review:
You're forgeting one major night between Riley and Buffy. As I recall, the spell was sex-based.
Comments from author:
I've spent years trying to block that episode out of my memory. In my world it never happened. Thank God!
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plus or Minus" from (Recent Donor)Mari
Review:
Well, this is definitely going to be the cause of much panic and angst among the Scoobies; especially since if Parker was "months and months" ago, and she's only two months along, there's something wonky.

I'm guesing they're off to the books to research demon and mystical pregnancies?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Mari] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plus or Minus" from KnightOwl
Review:
Poor Buffy! This is really good so far. It leaves me with a lot of questions but right now I feel really bad for Buffy. I loved Giles' reaction, though. Buffy definitely knew how he would react and then for him to feel so bad for her, too. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plus or Minus" from Claddagh
Review:
Hmmm.....Interesting beginning. I can't wait to see where you go next.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're reading. I know this wasn't the update you'd requested but I've been away from writing so long I felt like I needed to start somewhere fresh first. Thanks for reading.
Review By [Claddagh] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plus or Minus" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
Review:
"Poop Head"... should not have appeared more than once, and that's being generous. If you're pregnant and calling someone "poop head", the guy who did it would probably be showing up on Dateline: Predators soon after.
Comments from author:
Joe, I have to say this is the nicest review you've ever left me. I was also shocked that after I reread the story I found I agreed with you. Thanks for the criticism it was much appreciated. Although, I do have an ex that I still mentally refer to as The Jerk. I was probably subconsciously channeling that as I wrote the first chapter of the story.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
start back Page: 28 of 28
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking