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Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from Sarah
Wow, this was an incredible story, a great balance of action, comedy, angst, and drama. I'm not usually a fan of Buffy/Harry pairings, but I really like how you handled the relationship here. Very sweet, and very natural. And speaking of relationships, I liked how you handled the relationships between Buffy and everyone else. The new friends that she made, the changing relationships between old friends, and I loved the relationship between Buffy and the professors. Especially Dumbledore. I was soooo happy that he didn't die!

I love how you weaved the two mythologies together, and made it work so well. The entire plot was fantastic, tightly woven and creative. I also liked the pace of the story as well. It's an incredibly long work, and I was a bit intimidated by the word count, but when I started reading, it totally didn't feel that long at all. In fact, I read most of this in one sitting, cause I couldn't wait to find out what was next.

I really enjoyed your Buffy. IMO, with a lesser author, this could have turned into a Mary-sue mess. But even if she is now a god (which I think is just fantastic), you kept her human and vulnerable. That takes quite a bit of talent. I love reading about powerful/leader Buffy, and this was her at her best.

And before I wind up this long ass review, I just want to say that I also really enjoyed Sweetheart and Anjo. (I totally didn't see the Darla twist coming, but I loved it.)

Thanks for writing this story, and I see that you've started a sequel. I can't wait to read more about this world!
Review By [Sarah] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from Sabreangel
I loved the whole story, the plot, the character develpment, everything. The dream in the last chapter was an interesting twist. I say keep writting.
Review By [Sabreangel] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from (Recent Donor)jackie
This was a wonderful story, I just reread it and I fell in love with it all over again.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jackie] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Nine" from BlameyFomorrii
I love the building, back ground tension and mystery of Buffy's mysterious shakes. When I first heard of it, that it happens around magic, it made me think that maybe her body wants to absorb and suck away magic. Are the shakes because she refuses to do so, if this is the case?

Great chapter. Loving this story!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from BlameyFomorrii
Super Buffy-*grin* She is three in one.

I really like this story.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from BlameyFomorrii
I am really enjoying this story again. I can't remember why I stopped reading it at chapter 15, but I'm glad I refound it.

I enjoyed the dramatic apparation at the end.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Angelfirenze
Damn, that was dismal. Excellent writing so far. Very evocative, even in its vagueness.
Comments from author:
It's only the beginning wait till you ge to the good parts :)
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Angelfirenze
Well, I have to say I have no idea what's going on at all, but I'm definitely curious. And I stopped watching Buffy regularly after the fifth season. Joss and the rest lost their minds and it was enough dealing with the emotional trainwreck that was ANGEL without subjecting myself to what was going on in Sunnydale, as well. Bastards, doing such horrible things in so compelling a way. I couldn't look away, damn them.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Wow! Over the past few weeks, I've slowly but surely been reading on my pda this story. You've done a wonderful job weaving this verse together and I hope you'll someday write a future-fic in the verse...even if it's just a vingette.
Comments from author:
I actually wrote a sequel its posted as Allegiance, you should check it out!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from TeamB
This story is a work of magic! It’s just awesome! Great work!
Comments from author:
Wow! Thank you! That's so sweet :)
Review By [TeamB] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from jamielnorris
good story but please rename the manips so they have a different name it makes it easier to save to my pda
Comments from author:
okay i'll try
Review By [jamielnorris] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from Cristina
the ending its kinda weird but was just a dream...but if it was just a dream why you are planing a sequel...a mastery....can't wait then.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [12 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from btvsfrk
this fic is amazing!! i couldn't stop reading it. great job with the end, too, it was spectacular. :)
Review By [btvsfrk] • Date [12 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from wyvernwolf
Very nice enjoyable read indeedy. I'm happy that it's finished but also rather sad that there'll be no more updates. (Although I understand from your responses to other reviews that you haven't ruled out a sequel.)

The dynamics between all the characters was nicely done and I particularly liked the inclusion of Oz. The numerous twists and turns in the plot were exciting (not to mention all the cliffhangers that had me going "Argh!" more than once) and the final resolutions were just perfect.

The last chapter was especially crafty. You nearly had me until I read further and realised that Buffy was only dreaming! I liked that it wasn't a happily ever after and that Buffy was actually taking the time to deal with everything that has happened to her and all the changes she has undergone.

Congratulations on a story well written!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, I'm smiling from ear to ear. Still weighing the sequel, not sure if people will continue with the story.
Review By [wyvernwolf] • Date [7 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from MinnietheMouse
Very very good! This is the first time I've reviewed, but I love your story. You had me scared with the beginning of this chapter though, all that and it was just a dream?! but it was very good. Will there be a sequel?
Comments from author:
I'm not sure about a sequel, I'm still debating that idea. Hence the open ended ending, but I'm happy you liked it and that you reviewed. I love reviews!
Review By [MinnietheMouse] • Date [5 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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