Good story so far. Like your sane Buffy, been awhile since I've seen her. :)
Sadly you did make me ill with your pairing Dawn with that backstabbing buddy killer Andrew. I hate Andrew almost as much as Spike, and the idea of him together with Dawn...UGH!
Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Another very satisfying encounter, there at the end. I was puzzled about Willow apparently hiring Morris to drive all the way from Cleveland to Colorado Springs just to pick Buffy and Xander up at the airport and take them to a hotel. Perhaps you could clarify that a bit when you get around to proof-reading and polishing this intriguing story someday.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
How VERY satisfying to reconnect with Buffy's pre-Sunnydale past, and to use that to get some of the back-story on how Buffy and Xander came to be running their academy. Her old school "friend's" husband seems nice, at least, even if the wife is still a shallow ditz at heart. Wonderful to see Buffy be so much BETTER than that.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Calling someone 'snake' in front of people who work at SGC, then having a small woman beat up three jar heads is a good way to cause people to run back and forth like panicked chickens clucking "Hok'Taur, Hok'Taur" =).
Nifty story, cant wait for further chapters.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm really liking this story so far and I love the idea of Xander being a Carter, have you thought about making Xander and Buffy romantically involved . . . I really think that would be alot of fun . . .
Review By [BkwrmDancer] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Not Rated
I am really enjoying this story, normally I don't read Stargate crossovers but I saw that this had Xander and Buffy and I decided to give it a shot.
I like it.
Great interplay between the characters and I love your backstory, it fits and puts the story at a great place. I love that you have Buffy taking a central role in a Xander story and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm really loving this fic so far. It just has a really different vibe than all the other post-canon fics I've read. Your Buffy and Xander are a lot lighter than they were towards the end of the canon, and they have purpose- and I love that. I'm looking forward to seeing more soon.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Not Rated
I like it. Could do with longer chapters if you feel up to it, but otherwise, please keep going. I look forward to seeing if you can do the Gate characters as well as Buffy and Xander.
Review By [RemingtonSmythe] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
