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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from spk
Review:
I'll be honest with you...I almost didn't read this story because I'm not a big Xander fan, so I tend to skip the Xander-centric stories. However, I decided to give it a shot because I LOVE Stargate crossovers and I saw that Buffy would be going with Xander. So surprisingly, I am really enjoying this. I love the way you're writing the characters and especially the playful relationship between Buffy and Xander. Nice twist with Xander being related to Sam because I'm used to seeing stories where Jack's a dad. And I have to tell you that I loved the scene in the diner...got to love it when Buffy gets to give someone the smack down. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Rob
Review:
Good story so far. Like your sane Buffy, been awhile since I've seen her. :)

Sadly you did make me ill with your pairing Dawn with that backstabbing buddy killer Andrew. I hate Andrew almost as much as Spike, and the idea of him together with Dawn...UGH!


Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Kirallie
Review:
Good work! Interesting to see him as Sam's brother. Keep up the good work!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Another very satisfying encounter, there at the end. I was puzzled about Willow apparently hiring Morris to drive all the way from Cleveland to Colorado Springs just to pick Buffy and Xander up at the airport and take them to a hotel. Perhaps you could clarify that a bit when you get around to proof-reading and polishing this intriguing story someday.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RevDorothyL
Review:
How VERY satisfying to reconnect with Buffy's pre-Sunnydale past, and to use that to get some of the back-story on how Buffy and Xander came to be running their academy. Her old school "friend's" husband seems nice, at least, even if the wife is still a shallow ditz at heart. Wonderful to see Buffy be so much BETTER than that.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from JustAteDirt
Review:
Oooh, interesting!

More fic please!
Review By [JustAteDirt] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A delightful crossover so far... and a twist I haven't seen before.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from michaelangelo
Review:
Calling someone 'snake' in front of people who work at SGC, then having a small woman beat up three jar heads is a good way to cause people to run back and forth like panicked chickens clucking "Hok'Taur, Hok'Taur" =).

Nifty story, cant wait for further chapters.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from littleoldme
Review:
Ha! Too funny. I'm loving the fast updates. Please keep them coming!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from BkwrmDancer
Review:
I'm really liking this story so far and I love the idea of Xander being a Carter, have you thought about making Xander and Buffy romantically involved . . . I really think that would be alot of fun . . .
Review By [BkwrmDancer] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Interesting! Having seen this connection to the SG crew in a long time!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Chosenfire
Review:
I am really enjoying this story, normally I don't read Stargate crossovers but I saw that this had Xander and Buffy and I decided to give it a shot.

I like it.

Great interplay between the characters and I love your backstory, it fits and puts the story at a great place. I love that you have Buffy taking a central role in a Xander story and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from littleoldme
Review:
I'm really loving this fic so far. It just has a really different vibe than all the other post-canon fics I've read. Your Buffy and Xander are a lot lighter than they were towards the end of the canon, and they have purpose- and I love that. I'm looking forward to seeing more soon.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RemingtonSmythe
Review:
I like it. Could do with longer chapters if you feel up to it, but otherwise, please keep going. I look forward to seeing if you can do the Gate characters as well as Buffy and Xander.
Review By [RemingtonSmythe] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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