Great chapter, wonders where the go next and if the resident if malfoy manor are still present in the back seat and if there will be any interesting indentity there in, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [9 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
You did a great job on the story so far! I love your characters, you've really nailed the personalities. I love your Xander! The dialog is crisp and witty, the interactions between the characters are wonderful and the plot is great. The story is hysterically funny without being self conscious about it - by that I mean that the characters are being themselves and when situations and dialog occur they are natural rather than being forced for the sake of humor.
I can't wait to read more because I laughed myself silly on the story so far. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!
Review By [NiereG] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Okay, my brother found this and told me about it, and we both love it. I notice it's been almost 3 months since you last updated, so I hope a new chapter comes soon, because this is awesome. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :) I hope I get the chance. I'm not sure what'll happen next.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure what'll happen next, myself.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
OMG this story is so interesting that I'm sad that there isn't any more chapters. Lol Xander's reaction to having children is so funny. I wonder how the girl's mothers will act when Xander comes home after his trip with them.
I hope you will update soon
Review By [Sarimdragon] • Date [15 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
In that Shadow Potterverse, the wings likely mean that Faery blood was brought into wizarding bloodlines some time ago and Xander's promotive touch activated it. (and seen when naked before because they were still growing out. I daresay they got control of the things once fully grown.)
Excellent job, as always.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
The wings confuse me. They seem like they should have some significance but are rendered meaningless by the fact that they've left that universe behind.
Review By [TurfSurfer] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated