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Review of chapter "Not really the best weather for them" from Infinix
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The interaction in this is funny and smooth but I have a feeling that if the constant joking continues as is it will start to feel shallow and superficial.

Still I am really looking forward to more of this and I would like to petition to change that last line to "in search of booty to plunder to go along with the loot." It's at least a full quarter more witty with the bonus of being just slightly confusing.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not really the best weather for them" from kayron
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I can't believe you sent them to the zombie mall! HAHAHA!
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not really the best weather for them" from JoshuaRichardson
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Sooo... One zombie with cannon issues it is. Are we going to get somekind of backstory there? And also, a mall in the middle of the desert? Wha...?
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not really the best weather for them" from VillageOrchid
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This was very funny. Thanks for adding to the story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not really the best weather for them" from Rob
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I love Xander shadow walking and not even knowing.

Thanks godogma for typing!
Review By [Rob] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not really the best weather for them" from TristramShandy
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Thank you godogma for typing up this chapter.

Thank you dogbertcarroll for writing this chapter.

Thank you José Cuervo for producing the tequila I spat on my monitor whilst reading this chapter.
Review By [TristramShandy] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not really the best weather for them" from mouse
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I laughed my freaking ass off !!! Please write more.
Review By [mouse] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not really the best weather for them" from Bluesnowman
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great stuff.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Valley of the Shadow of the cousin of Death" from LordCorwin
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Just introducing Sirius into this story .... you deserve a 10
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Valley of the Shadow of the cousin of Death" from VillageOrchid
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This was fun, and good to keep track of the continuity. Hopefully Sirius can "accio Xander's sword" or they might just get lost.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run along little doggies" from VillageOrchid
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That was nice... and I guessed Tara.... except wasn't there a female blonde vampire called Sunday on the show during the college years?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sounds like Third Rock from The Sun" from VillageOrchid
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The new girl doesn't have a name?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who’s on Top?" from VillageOrchid
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This is going to be even more weird, isn't it. At least Xander knows he is voluntarily a minion of Isis/Aphodite.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "De-aging Elvis or Losing a kingdom, but becoming t" from VillageOrchid
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Weird, but interesting... because you are following a narrative.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Valley of the Shadow of the cousin of Death" from (Past Donor)lucidity
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Very fun story - looking forward to your updates!
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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