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Review of chapter "Just before" from jujukittychick
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“Thanks for ruining that nice moment Spike.” Xander grumbled.

“Anytime luv.”

lol again, perfect for those two!

really neat story so far, the plot's really interesting and i like your take on the characters. there's a few inconsistencies throughout but nothing too major, and from what i understand you've been writing this over four years so that's kind of understandable lol. there are quite a few spelling/grammar issues, some of them changing the whole meaning of what i had to assume you were trying to say (like making something negative instead of positive) and causing me to have to re-read several sentences in each chapter to try to figure out the correct context. other than that, it's really a pretty good story. keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Oath" from jujukittychick
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awwwww, can't believe you killed off buffy! *sniffles* of course now they've got a pissed off willow/xander combo to deal with and -that- oughta be fun lol. and can i just say having the already insane marmee noir possessing dru (i'm assuming it was dru from the hints you dropped) just screams trouble lol. ummm, question, was xander flying? or was asher flying and carrying xander? the way you worded it, sounded like both were flying
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting out" from jujukittychick
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“I'm not some princess!” Xander yelled, and got back.

“Your my princess luv” If he didn't love the vampire so much he'd stake him.

lmfao that is so perfect!!

one little anatomical issue with spike and asher...said spike had asher's legs over his shoulders, that would be kinda difficult with them standing, though it does make for an interesting visual lol
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the end is...nigh" from jujukittychick
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so the scoobies get to meet the council, that should be...explosive lol. one thing, in an earlier chapter, you said that asher didn't know that spike had gone against belle, in this one you said he'd seen it happen. also, it's ditto, not dido :)
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Souvenirs and Smiles" from jujukittychick
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nice story so far. kind of confused as to what time (day or night) people were in during this chapter though. you were talking about xander being up with the sunshine and eating breakfast, then damien and nate were saying goodnight and it was 11:30 (which is either super early at night for the vamp or super late in the morning since sun's been up a while), then it's an hour to midnight (which would put it before 11:30PM if that was what time damien went to bed). just something small, but thought i'd bring it up. *skips off to read more*
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just before" from silvergaurd
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Hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just before" from nightslayer
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i still think this is just the cutiest story. the Spike/Xander/Asher point. though buffys death was a real surprise!
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just before" from msdarque
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Intriguing, sad, great chapter...
JC is an ass, I think I like Angelus better than him.
Our trio is quite hot- I mean, Xander and Spike and Asher... damn. ;)
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just before" from Elleria
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Very happy to see an update. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Oath" from noirekitsune
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oh i understand if you just dont have the time
heck if i had the time i would beta for you (i had it on good authority that i was pretty good at least being quick and as accurate as possible lol)
i use to do that a lot under a different name
but anyway like i said its not like id stop reading for a reason like that
and i dont think you're being mean at all!^^
maybe when its done(the story) i could offer to just go over it quick if you wanted
if not thats cool too
it'll always be a fav i can tell that already!
Comments from author:
I understand you issues, but as I do this without much concern anymore. Only wanting to finish this story to get to my more favorable ones, well I'm sorry to say that my schedule is a little too packed to read over my chapters more than once. I'm sure I have commented on similar reviews such as yours but they always seem to come in.

I'm not being mean, or at least I'm trying not to be. I have a lot on my plate and this is a relaxing pass time. I have, on many occasions attempted to find a beta. Either those I get are sloppy and poor, or they apparently get too pulled into the story to see the mistakes.
Review By [noirekitsune] • Date [22 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Oath" from DarkFaerieYumi
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OMG! Buffy! T.T RIP Buffy.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Oath" from silvergaurd
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hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Oath" from MissE
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Interesting chapter. I do hope they can get Dru out of the hold of the other vampire, and look forward to seeing what happens to her.
Review By [MissE] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Oath" from VillageOrchid
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Good stuff overall. After feeling the forces coming... then not feeling them coming the night they went out... there was some serious concealment magic going on. The few typos still got to me, but not so much that I couldn't follow the story. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Figure it out" from VillageOrchid
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To answer Ethan's last line... thank goodness it isn't every day that Regina is popping in and out of Xander's head. However, you did infer that her murmur, her thoughts and feelings are now almost always there in the background. So essentially, she's always in Xander's body and head just not always taking control of it.
Comments from author:
Hello, I'm glad you are reviewing my stories but may I ask you not to review so continuously. I know there are errors and such, as this has gone without a beta for sometime. But you must understand that these reviews go to my phone and it is distracting when doing other things. This is just a friendly request. Thank You.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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