Honestly, most of the story doesn't read like a story... it reads like an extended summary. The kind of blurbs I expect to find on Wikipedia describing episodes of Buffy or Stargate that I missed. It's just very... abbreviated. Like you have an idea for a story, but you're either too lazy or too rushed to actually sit down and write it out so you're posting the chapter outlines you've come up with.

It's an interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing what Willow has to say to the leaders of the SGC.

One problem Willow & her group are going to have initially is, they won't respect the SGC; will figure they are like the Initiative; and won't realize how important they have been in defending earth. Hopefully the Nox will intervene if things get out of hand.... hm, I bet Willow has read some of Carter's physics papers....
Too bad about nobody else in Angel's group surviving... maybe also an explanation for Giles refusing to help save Fred...? I would like to see Fred 'resurface' more inside Illyria...
Not to mention have Illyria approach the colonists fleet. My guess is she's mentioned in those ancient texts their religion is based on. That could be quite amusing ---

Very nice. Can't wait to see how you will handle the meeting. I really hope you don't overpower Willow and the Scoobies like many BTVS fans tend to do in such crossovers.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Especially Illyria and how she will handle the Cylons and Colonials

Nice. I like that Willow still go there to talk to them, just to check. and peter can bodyguard her, too :D

Of course, i can't help but think that willow would have dealt with the whole sylar thing if they were in the same universe.

Ok, is it wrong of me to want Illyria to win? Because as of now I totally want to see the Asgaard and the other meddeling idiots to burn.

The Colonials won't be too happy to discover the nature of their gods... meanwhile one wonders about Cylon origins, since 'the 5' seem to trace back at least that far... nice move mixing the Specials in... I'm hoping somebody else survived the fight in the alley besides Illyria, having a vampire show up would rock the SGC & the Asgard etc also...

i've found this story interesting to read, but i am really confused as to what you intend to do about the asgard since you stated they have all died in the first part of this fic, yet they seam alive and well in this second part.

It's an interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

ahah.

Delicious. Sylar must should not be able to copy willow's powers, given they are spiritual in nature, but who knows? maybe she is a "heroes" whose power is magical power...

I enjoy seeing the Nox-eye-view of the historical struggle for equilibrium between positive and negative forces on Earth, but that discontinuity in the timeline regarding the Asgard's survival or non-survival is pretty huge, ... unless you're going to turn around in some future chapter and say that, without the SGC or anyone else realizing it, Illyria's trip through the Stargate has already significantly altered reality as we know it, so that NOW the Asgard haven't yet died?

Yea! I'm a big lover of Illyria backstory. Ok, of Illyria in general. Please don't destroy her. I like her better then I do the Asgaard (they're small and ugly and smell like rotten fish)

Um, if the Asgard race is dead in the first story, then how are they alive in this one?

Nice one. I love to see a fic centered on Illyria. Can't wait for more. And a crossover with the compelled universe would be great

Good chapter up-date soon