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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from TonyTheJew
Review:
Great story over all, So how far have you plan it out? Will anyone else show up in the next book from Buffy or Angle?
Comments from author:
Well, like I always say when asked this, I have this story outlined waaaaay out in front of where I actually am with writing it.
There's this (extremely long) novel, and then a 'book' of shoter stories I'd like to write when I get a chance, and then back to another serious novel. Some Angel people would feature in the second one, and the Buffy crew in the third.
Now all I need is for some incredibly rich person (or a cabal of moderately-wealthy people) to support me so I can quit my jobs and write full-time.
That would be quite nifty.
^_^
Review By [TonyTheJew] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Just... Wow!
Comments from author:
Cool!
^_^
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Jonathansicari
Review:
Ok, all I can say is WOW. I really loved this. The fight with Itai was awesome and I really love the character Alex. I'm glad I gave this series a second chance. I glanced at this part a couple days ago and blew it off. Now that I've read both parts I'm gonna keep an eye on it.
Comments from author:
Obviously I'm glad you gave it a chance.
^_^

I hope you enjoy the rest.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Jonathansicari
Review:
Overall, nice work. Your avoiding the common trap of whitewashing Faith and shifting the blame to others. I read the whole thing in one sitting. Now to read Book 2.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
I can't decide if I like your reluctant-slayer Faith or not. But the story is compelling, so I'm looking forward to the next part.
Comments from author:
You're right; this particular slice of Faith isn't easy to like. Coming right off of the two body-switching episodes, where it was shown very clearly that Faith was hating herself a lot (and trying everything possible to run away from that realization--literally), I ended up writing a hyper dark, hyper violent sort of person.
And it gets worse before it gets better, I'm afraid.
But eventually, ultimately, she'll come out the other side.
Maybe.
^_^
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from atz
Review:
Even better than the copy you had originally posted on your website (unless my memory has faded even more than usual and you haven't re-edited it).
Comments from author:
::Waves arms in frantic Hushing gestures::

Shh! Shhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

::Looks furtively in all directions::

Don't SAY stuff like that!
I'm pretending that this is all fresh, new stuff!
^_^

(And nope, this is pretty much the original version)
Review By [atz] • Date [1 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
More soon? Pretty please?

As for being nice to you? Our mutual friend sometimes C&C's things for me so *I* know what you go through! Besides, you are the greatest at writing Faith.

*begging* more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from ShyBob
Review:
Great Faith characterization! The craftsmanship of the story is awesome: believable OCs, non-cheesy prophecies, and a dark slayer with depth.
Comments from author:
*Thrummmmmmmmmmm*
^_^!

Thanks.
I know my stuff is kind of an acquired taste, but if even a few of you are reading and enjoying it, I'll keep posting the dark stories.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [29 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Ok, um, WOW! I'd read this story a long, long time ago and came away with the feeling that it was just a Faith blood and guts fight fest....But, um, its just so much more. Ya might need to put a warning about the violence at the beginning.

You can write, man! Damn it you can write!
Comments from author:
Well, it's not JUST blood and guts....
o_O

I rated it PG18 or whatever for the violence; I think I somehow missed the 'dark' descripto-button, though; this is definitely uber-dark.

"You can write, man! Damn it you can write!"

Ah, well, there you go.
The problem with you, lady, is that you're always so nice to me that I can't fully believe you when you say stuff like that.
Be mean and snarky and critical sometimes, darn it!
(^_^)
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [28 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from becuzitswrong
Review:
Great story. I really love your take on Faith. No one writes her character better. Thanks so much for letting us read your writings.
Comments from author:
Help! Help!
I'm suddenly feeling warm and fuzzy and slightly self-confident--It's scary!
(^_^)

Thank you, though.
Seriously.
Review By [becuzitswrong] • Date [28 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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