Review of chapter "Chapter Three—An Alternative Offer" from spk
Review:
WOW! Amazing job with Buffy's character in these 2 chapters. I couldn't help but cry as she prepared her parents' funerals & Giles'. My heart broke for her as she had to choose between her mother & father. I can't wait to see how she does at the Academy. Beautiful job. In fact, the emotions that you were able to pull out of your readers makes this deserve a "10." :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I am glad you liked it. The academy should be fun. All that testosterone. 8)
Review By [spk] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three—An Alternative Offer" from arkeus
Review:
interesting.
A nice way to begin a fic, though willow is my favorite character Y_y.
Comments from author:
I like Willow too. Maybe we'll see something of her someday. 8)
Review of chapter "Chapter Three—An Alternative Offer" from KnightWulf
Review:
liked it alot please update soon
Comments from author:
As soon as I can. Glad you are enjoying the story.
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three—An Alternative Offer" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Interesting.
I wish Travers had gotten his ass kicked though.
So what news does Joyce have?
Comments from author:
You'll find out soon. 8)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three—An Alternative Offer" from crossoverjunkie
Review:
I wonder what the news is. I am enjoying this story please keep it going. Sucks that none of the scoobies survived but I'm sure you have a reason for that.
Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm exploring how Buffy would do without her traditional support structure. Instead, she'll have a different one.
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from Satori
Review:
*tic* You used OMG in a fic, when no characters were online.
Don't you see a slight problem with that?
The idea is sound, but this needs some polishing
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I had not gone back and fixed this chapter like I had originally intended to. It was the first fic I wrote chronologically and shows it. Hopefully, I will get better.
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from Ponder
Review:
Wow. Impressive start. After Columbine (in the very recent past as of when your story is set) and the OKC bombing, how in the world could the authorities interpret what happened as anything other than an act of terrorism, 'Sunnydale Syndrome' or not.
I look forward to later chapters.
I'm with the other reviewers; definitely need to avoid starting a sentence with "Dawn" in a buffyverse story unless you mean Buffy's sister. :)
*** Ponder
Comments from author:
Not if there was an active cover up at more than one level. It never made sense to me that no one outside of Sunnydale would question the number of deaths, etc. Not unless the Mayor had ties at much higher levels, such as the state police, and maybe the FBI. Anyway, here there's been a cover up. I promise to respond to comments quicker next time. Thanks for your review. You always give insightful comments.
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from Fritolays
Review:
Sad but interesting story so far. Wow, I can't imagine what Buffy must be feeling right now. I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work :)
Review By [Fritolays] • Date [12 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from Emeraldiceus
Review:
Interesting, I like it. I hope you update again soon!
Review By [Emeraldiceus] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from Tanydwr
Review:
Wow.
Well, I guess that's one way to get Buffy out of Sunnydale, post-traumatic stress and all! As a last survivor, will she be blamed, or, more likely, heralded as some kind of heroic survivor? How will she explain her survival, or will she just let everyone think she's dead?
How is she heading to the SG world? Did the explosion rupture something that freed a Goa'uld? Is she headed to see 'Uncle Jack', 'Grandpa Hammond' or 'Aunt Janet'? Or will she just randomly find herself there after fleeing? What about Faith? Will Buffy leave her in Sunnydale Hospital, to wake in a world minus the Scoobies, or somehow take her with her?
Looking forward to reading more.
Lol, Tanydwr
Comments from author:
Whew, finally got back to this fic. Hopefully the update will answer some questions. Btw, absolutely no familial ties are going to be exploited.
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Jeez...
Not just the Scoobies and folks ... but the ENTIRE ASSEMBLY??? Holy effin Cow! That's just JEEZUZ
What's left of the town's population? Is there anybody?
Did Oz bite it too? A werewolf might've survived. They heal quick, y'know.
Can't wait to see how the SGC gets involved.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from MrGordo
Review:
Very Intense. And I for one LOVE Dark Buffy centric fic especially when there as well written as this one is.
Review By [MrGordo] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from dizzyspirit
Review:
That was very well written. You are very detailed. I like it. That's something I'm not the greatest at. Anyway, very good start. I'm already looking forward to more.
Review By [dizzyspirit] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from Marcel
Review:
Well... there is another story that started with Buffy dying... and I tried for a year to get past the first chapter. When I finally made it, I realized that it was one of the best Buffy-Stargate crossover I have ever read. So, I'll give this a chance. But I have to say... dark, not my favorite genre :)