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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Trace
Review:
I'm absolutely loving this, so far.

I hope you update it soon; I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I have a new chapter written and off to my beta. Expect me to post it around this weekend sometime...
Review By [Trace] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Cataclysmic
Review:
Absolutely love the story so far, you are doing a great job, I hope you update again soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. This is the next story I'm updating after Buffy's Hammer, so expect it next weekish sometime. 8)
Review By [Cataclysmic] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from morange
Review:
oh that dream sequence had me thinking, what's happening in Sunnydale in terms of protection while B is away? hmm, really not happy with McNam dude. stupid marine. lol

more soon please

Morange
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Sunnydale's going to be fine. The Powers have a plan in place to deal with good old Sunnyhell... 8)

McNamara is a poopy head for sure... 8)
Review By [morange] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Bunney
Review:
Onions have LAYERS!!! :) Great part I dig that you are having her get suspicious about Buffy :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Buffy's an onion. Cool.

Connie is starting to put the pieces together. She really likes Cali, but she's too smart to ignore what's going on around her. Plus, she's put her fate into Cali's hands by joining her in Cali's campaign against the two senior cadets.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from nicjphill
Review:
I love the difference between fashion Buffy and Airforce Cali and that Connie got to see the both sides! Can't wait for the next update!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. What can I say, Buffy has layers... lol
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from queenevil
Review:
I love how she picks her teams! That's how I do it too!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. ROFLMAO! 8)
Review By [queenevil] • Date [14 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Shezzi
Review:
OK, not sure if I left a review for this chapter yet, so: This is excellent. You've shown that Connie isn't an idiot and has picked up on the oddities of her roomie (a bit hard not to, even if she isn't sneaking out to patrol)

Now, not being american, i have a question: you make dressing from cornbread? how does that work?

ANyway, a really nice chapter, looking forward to the next one with bated breath! love xx Shezzi
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying Connie. She is going to be pickingup more and more of Buffy's oddities as times goes by.

Ahh, cornbread dressing. Here's a link: http://www.texascooking.com/recipes/dressinggiblets.htm

There is nothing better. 8)
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [14 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Another great chapter with links to other new (to me) stuff thrown in. Enjoyable!

I may have asked this and forgotten. Is Connie an OC or based on a cross-over?

Keep writing!

;-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Connie is an OC, someone I put together as a foil for Cadet Buffy. 8)
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [12 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from NaiveGhost
Review:
I like this story. Can't wait for more SG(1).

Keep writing!

;-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like it. 8)
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [12 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
:) excellent
Comments from author:
Thanks. 8)
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [11 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from spring
Review:
I love this chapter. PLEASE please please update this wonderful fic again soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. More coming soonish... 8)
Review By [spring] • Date [11 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Bobboky
Review:
very very good
Comments from author:
Thank you. 8)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Lotusja
Review:
Great chapter. I love this story!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you love it!
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [10 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from jennzabelle
Review:
Awesome!
"Hello, Connie, and welcome to the Happy House of Conversational Land Mines. Please watch your step."
I really liked seeing the remnants of L.A. Buffy and let-me-run-across-town-in-heels-to-rescue-Kendra-etal Buffy in AF Buffy. And it was nice to get some of Connie's background, too. I can see how Girly!Buffy and Mama!Joyce would be totally foreign to her experience, and I really feel for B having to keep her hair up and be secret identity gal once again. But Connie's bright, caring and curious. I'm not sure telling her would be the best thing ever, but she's definitely gonna keep noticing the oddities that are Buffy. It just remains to be seen how she'll react and how long it will take to make Buffy come clean if she ever does. I had totally forgotten Amy and it was weird but nice to see that Buffy is taking care of her in Willow's absence. I wonder if the Nox could cure her?
Well, I'm really glad I got to read and review this story so far. I eagerly await more!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. You called it with that one.

I wanted to flesh out Connie a bit, make her more three dimensional. I also wanted to contrast Buffy and Connie's lives pre-BCT. Still, though, they have more in common than not...

Connie will find out about Buffy one day, but who knows when?

Amy. I couldn't let anything happen to her, so I had Buffy 'rescue' her from Willow's parents...

Maybe the Nox could. After all, what they do? Magic...
Review By [jennzabelle] • Date [10 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten—First Year: The Assignment" from jennzabelle
Review:
Ah, the plot thickens!
I liked Connie's reaction to Jack's offer and Buffy's demand that Connie Not Tell Her the number of papers Buffy now had to do. I loved Joyce's mini-perspective and baking binge. The pecan pie story was a nice touch. I also liked how Buffy got awkward and quiet with Connie in the car and afterwards. Joyce probably called B's reaction to telling new people about her secret identity correctly - Giles, Xander, Willow and the rest of the peripheral Scoobies are a loss she's still learning to deal with in unexpected ways. Will Connie end up knowing B's secret and if so will it be before or after Jack figures out there's something fishy going on?
I can't wait to see how well Operation: Preemptive Strike goes down. And I hope we get the team's reaction to Buffy at some point.
I'm glad there's more to read, but I'm almost caught up! Help!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I tried to flesh the characters out by having them do normal things...

Will Connie learn Buffy's secret? Maybe. As trust builds, Buffy will feel increasingly like telling her...

You'll find out about that soonish... 8)
Review By [jennzabelle] • Date [10 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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