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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve—The Investigation" from DreamOfStories
Review:
Oooh... complications!

You know, you might want to be careful with how much manipulating Buffy does with the guys. If people note that she's being seen with Sher and Gator then some ugly rumours might start flying around. Nothing Buffy can't handle, but it could put a serious dent in her 'I'm a perfect cadet' routine.

Still love it, and thanks for updating when I needed a pick me up!

Dream
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I see what you are talking about. Buffy's going to avoid Sher in the future. As far as Gator's concerned, she'll be playing it by ear. 8)
Review By [DreamOfStories] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from shwilly
Review:
Huge fan of the story. Its a great twist that I havn't seen done yet!

I was watching an old sg1 episode the other day from season 4 called prodigy...part of the episode centers around a academy cadet, jennifer hailey (sp?). Wasn't sure if you knew about her and thought she is someone that would be easy to work into the plot at some point...maybe having her be one of the women those a**es tried to pick on or something. Anyway, you are the creative type, just wanted to let you know of a character that you could use that exists in the gate world...

Can't wait to read the next chapter and I hope you update soon...

Cheers,
Shwil

Response to comment: Thanks for the heads up, keep them comeing. Looking forward to the new chapter and the ones following! Thanks for your friends link and hope he keeps it up as well. Best of luck!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

I loved that episode. Ponder, my beta, worked her into a great little story based upon mine. You can find her (sorry) story here:

http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-15392/Ponder+Don+t+Stand+Out.htm

You'll almost certainly see more of Cadet Hailey. She is, after all, almost as smart as Carter (and probably smarter than Rodney) so she'll probably end up as one of Buffy's friends later.

Expect an update by this weekend.
Review By [shwilly] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Trace
Review:
I'm absolutely loving this, so far.

I hope you update it soon; I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I have a new chapter written and off to my beta. Expect me to post it around this weekend sometime...
Review By [Trace] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Cataclysmic
Review:
Absolutely love the story so far, you are doing a great job, I hope you update again soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. This is the next story I'm updating after Buffy's Hammer, so expect it next weekish sometime. 8)
Review By [Cataclysmic] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from morange
Review:
oh that dream sequence had me thinking, what's happening in Sunnydale in terms of protection while B is away? hmm, really not happy with McNam dude. stupid marine. lol

more soon please

Morange
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Sunnydale's going to be fine. The Powers have a plan in place to deal with good old Sunnyhell... 8)

McNamara is a poopy head for sure... 8)
Review By [morange] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Bunney
Review:
Onions have LAYERS!!! :) Great part I dig that you are having her get suspicious about Buffy :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Buffy's an onion. Cool.

Connie is starting to put the pieces together. She really likes Cali, but she's too smart to ignore what's going on around her. Plus, she's put her fate into Cali's hands by joining her in Cali's campaign against the two senior cadets.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from nicjphill
Review:
I love the difference between fashion Buffy and Airforce Cali and that Connie got to see the both sides! Can't wait for the next update!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. What can I say, Buffy has layers... lol
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from queenevil
Review:
I love how she picks her teams! That's how I do it too!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. ROFLMAO! 8)
Review By [queenevil] • Date [14 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Shezzi
Review:
OK, not sure if I left a review for this chapter yet, so: This is excellent. You've shown that Connie isn't an idiot and has picked up on the oddities of her roomie (a bit hard not to, even if she isn't sneaking out to patrol)

Now, not being american, i have a question: you make dressing from cornbread? how does that work?

ANyway, a really nice chapter, looking forward to the next one with bated breath! love xx Shezzi
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying Connie. She is going to be pickingup more and more of Buffy's oddities as times goes by.

Ahh, cornbread dressing. Here's a link: http://www.texascooking.com/recipes/dressinggiblets.htm

There is nothing better. 8)
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [14 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Another great chapter with links to other new (to me) stuff thrown in. Enjoyable!

I may have asked this and forgotten. Is Connie an OC or based on a cross-over?

Keep writing!

;-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Connie is an OC, someone I put together as a foil for Cadet Buffy. 8)
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [12 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from NaiveGhost
Review:
I like this story. Can't wait for more SG(1).

Keep writing!

;-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like it. 8)
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [12 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
:) excellent
Comments from author:
Thanks. 8)
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [11 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from spring
Review:
I love this chapter. PLEASE please please update this wonderful fic again soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. More coming soonish... 8)
Review By [spring] • Date [11 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Bobboky
Review:
very very good
Comments from author:
Thank you. 8)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven—Thanksgiving" from Lotusja
Review:
Great chapter. I love this story!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you love it!
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [10 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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