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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from preier
Review:
fantastic story. i was a bit annoyed at the xanderbashing in the first chapter (and the braindead moment of all the cast) but i'm really pleased to have pushed through. the AF academy part is well balanced, especially showing both hardships and their meaning.

buffy and jack's daughter/father relationship was perhaps a bit fast (on jack's side, especially) but with plausible help from the PTB, why not ^^

thank you for sharing your tales
Review By [preier] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Amai
Review:
I'm so glad this is updating again, and glad to see it remains awesome!
Review By [Amai] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from MeganPrice
Review:
I pray that life is treating you well and that we will soon see an update...PLEASE!!!
Review By [MeganPrice] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Bunney
Review:
I truly love this fic! I cant wait to see what happens next!
Review By [Bunney] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from tryingtobestine
Review:
Love this story! Thanks for writing :)
Review By [tryingtobestine] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from lilnudger
Review:
Just an amazing story, that I can't wait to read more of.
Review By [lilnudger] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from ikepear
Review:
What a thrill it was to find these new chapters! "Life's Ending" & "Things to do in Colo. Springs" etc are 2 of my favs. Put you, Buffy & SG1 together & magic happens.

You resolved the battle cliffhanger nicely, & I was surprised when Buffy's slayer secret identity stayed a secret. Very smoothly done &, as I said, unexpected. Like Buffy, I thought this secret had been revealed by events.

You write well, & this is a very entertaining story. As for the typos & omissions, I'm glad you didn't spend much more time reviewing & revising. Having these chapters is worth a few glitches. For God's sake please don't get bogged down in major revisions to the whole thing. That way lies story interruptus or worse.

I'm looking forward to more chapters when you get the chance to write them.

Regards
Ikepear
Review By [ikepear] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from randyzoopurple
Review:
So good Franken Kennedy I hated on tv and now tth ;)
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Davee
Review:
Wouldn't it be awesome if Buffy met John Sheppard during training *Cough* ship otp *cough*
Review By [Davee] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from lateVMlover
Review:
THis story was world class.
In writing you do kick major ass.
I loved this story oh so much
If I could meet you, I'd buy you lunch.
I really hope you write more
If not, my heart will surely be sore!
This was a truly fine tale.
Thanks for sharing it and making me feel so well!

Great read!
More please!
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from spk
Review:
Okay...I will give it a try.
I normally postpone my reviews with a sigh
because I can't rhyme without being a bore,
but this update was too good to ignore.

Loved the twists and points of view!
Just want to say great writing & thank you! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten—First Year: The Assignment" from lateVMlover
Review:
This story is not only incredible but it's so well-written! So glad I found it!
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from mousemt
Review:
Love, love, love the new chapter! More, please.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from evilredknight
Review:
Good chapter.
Nice thing with Kennedy.

One like quibble.

SERE training? I thought she had signed up for Soaring/Glider training?
Wasn't she concerned about the ground school/theory in a previous talk with Jack?
Comments from author:
Things change. Plus I found out that that typically, cadets do their glider training during the academic year and SERE during one of their 3 3-week summer terms.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Twoboots
Review:
I must say, I am rather curious as to how you are planning to introduce Dawn, when you get to that part of the story.
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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