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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Bunney
Review:
I truly love this fic! I cant wait to see what happens next!
Review By [Bunney] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from tryingtobestine
Review:
Love this story! Thanks for writing :)
Review By [tryingtobestine] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from lilnudger
Review:
Just an amazing story, that I can't wait to read more of.
Review By [lilnudger] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from ikepear
Review:
What a thrill it was to find these new chapters! "Life's Ending" & "Things to do in Colo. Springs" etc are 2 of my favs. Put you, Buffy & SG1 together & magic happens.

You resolved the battle cliffhanger nicely, & I was surprised when Buffy's slayer secret identity stayed a secret. Very smoothly done &, as I said, unexpected. Like Buffy, I thought this secret had been revealed by events.

You write well, & this is a very entertaining story. As for the typos & omissions, I'm glad you didn't spend much more time reviewing & revising. Having these chapters is worth a few glitches. For God's sake please don't get bogged down in major revisions to the whole thing. That way lies story interruptus or worse.

I'm looking forward to more chapters when you get the chance to write them.

Regards
Ikepear
Review By [ikepear] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from randyzoopurple
Review:
So good Franken Kennedy I hated on tv and now tth ;)
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Davee
Review:
Wouldn't it be awesome if Buffy met John Sheppard during training *Cough* ship otp *cough*
Review By [Davee] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from lateVMlover
Review:
THis story was world class.
In writing you do kick major ass.
I loved this story oh so much
If I could meet you, I'd buy you lunch.
I really hope you write more
If not, my heart will surely be sore!
This was a truly fine tale.
Thanks for sharing it and making me feel so well!

Great read!
More please!
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from spk
Review:
Okay...I will give it a try.
I normally postpone my reviews with a sigh
because I can't rhyme without being a bore,
but this update was too good to ignore.

Loved the twists and points of view!
Just want to say great writing & thank you! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten—First Year: The Assignment" from lateVMlover
Review:
This story is not only incredible but it's so well-written! So glad I found it!
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from mousemt
Review:
Love, love, love the new chapter! More, please.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from evilredknight
Review:
Good chapter.
Nice thing with Kennedy.

One like quibble.

SERE training? I thought she had signed up for Soaring/Glider training?
Wasn't she concerned about the ground school/theory in a previous talk with Jack?
Comments from author:
Things change. Plus I found out that that typically, cadets do their glider training during the academic year and SERE during one of their 3 3-week summer terms.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Twoboots
Review:
I must say, I am rather curious as to how you are planning to introduce Dawn, when you get to that part of the story.
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from ecbookworm
Review:
It's back! Glad to see this hasn't been abandoned. Wonderful chapters and looking forward to seeing Buffy back at training.
Review By [ecbookworm] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from DieselDriver
Review:
Just finished re-reading this chapter and I have a few thoughts. First, this statement by Col. Jack "they will have a brevet rank of 2nd lieutenant while working in my command." reminds me so much of the part of Robert A. Heinlein's "Starship Troopers" that I wanted to mention it. If, by some quirk of fate or events, you haven't read the book (the movie sucked worse than anything I've ever seen done to a book by the Hollywood crowd) then you really should. I believe this so firmly that if you do buy it, and don't think so, I will pay for the book and you can do whatever you like with it as long as you don't destroy it. The only difference was that in ST the trainees were brevetted to 3rd Lieutenant to place them in the chain of command instead of 2nd. This would serve the purpose of automatically putting any recently graduated and commissioned 2nd looie as ranking officer should they be the only ones alive to run things. Other than that there was no difference. Any ranking officer would still be smart to ask advice of the person experienced in the field. Jack tries to make sure his officers are the best of the best. OMGosh. Just had a thought. You should consider doing a buffy ST crossover. You can put her in a platoon right next to Rico's Roughneks. Call them "Cali's Crusaders" or something else alliterative. "Summer's Slammers" would be pretty good;-)
Comments from author:
I didn't get until I went back and reviewed the book. It's been nearly 25 years since I read it.

That is an interesting idea. I quite like it.

A Starship Troopers/BtVS Xover would be great.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Senko
Review:
Something occured to me on re-reading this chapter hasn't Doyle mentioned several times that he works for the powers that be?

Seeing Notty's reaction to Kennedy's information about Buffy should be interesting and Andrews if.he ever finds out she's not only alive but being sent to battle aliens.

I wonder if Kennedy knows Buffy also helped kill Kakistos and the love she sent to help was Angelis?
Comments from author:
Brain damaged. Chapter fixed.

Kennedy will have heard various things about Buffy through the 'grapevine' as it were. And through her dreams as well.
Review By [Senko] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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