I'm like to first stay I hate you. No I dont, I love you I really do. But you make me cry, tears and sniffles and everything. EVERYTIME I read something you write. Which isn't a bad thing mind you but hurts. Everything you write makes me sad. But its all SOOOO good. Seriously though I feel so bad. The ending is so touching. They changed everything and remember nothing. It seems that everything you write is about children who give up everything to save a world they won't remember. I ADORE you're use of Luna, cause it always seem like she's forgotten but this, you you put her to good use. How they meet, truly really MEET is perfect and made me happy sigh. Snape is wonderful, for seeing what was there even if he didn't understand and Hermione, she was a nice way to show...now and then I guess but then is just the same as now she just didn't know it. Anyway this was awesome and I love you and everything you write.
Review By [FireFox] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
You know this makes me sob every single time I read it. Every single time. So in my book that makes it... well it is pretty much perfect. Love it. Just adore it.
You have a very unique and compelling writing style. It's almost stream of conciousness, as if you writing how a mind would think, and the language you use is very effective as well as gripping. Thanks for posting, and looking forward to whatever you write next.
I usually like explanations, but you know how not to give them and how to make your story into art. The emotion flowing through the words felt genuine. This is what proves that fanfic has almost no rules, just guidelines.
Review By [Bluedove] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Wow. This story just about tops everything else you've written. It's sad and happy and eerie, all at the same time. I love it so much!!! I wish you would write more!!!!
Review By [Silmedin] • Date [14 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It's amazing, beautiful, fantastic, excellent, spectacular.. I could go on forever. It is truly a 'wow' story.. the end just took my breath away.. thank you
Review By [TheEmpressOfJohoho] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is one of the most unique and original stories I've seen in a long time. The ending was so bitter sweet, but it was perfect. Nothing else would have worked. This was beautiful, truly wonderful.