So who was behind Xander in the bathroom. I can't see him imagining things

This is nice; well thought out, with just enough explanation. Please update soon, I wanna know what comes next! love xx Shezzi

This looks like a really interesting fic, I hope to see more of it soon.

Cool!

neat idea, put you on tracking so I can catch you when you have the time to write.

I like it.

very good, i really liked that :-)

The first slayer fell to the prior? Are you talking about Traitor!Buffy?

ouch :/

More, more, please. You've got a very good start on this story, and I'd be very interested in seeing where you go with it from here. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

This is a great start! I can't wait to read more.

This is so sad and so possible given the two universes that I'm just amazed. I do hope you plan to finish this one.

Good story. Very different. The characters are well done. I can see Xander and Dawn being so worn down by everything that had happened to them in their world that they would trust that Willow's spell had sent them to the SGC and feeling like they had no choice but to trust the people there. I can see him being desperate enough to trust them with the truth about Dawn. In the first chapter you did a really good job of showing what they must have endured. I would love to see more. Any chance of an update soon?

This is shaping up to be really great. Looking forward to more.

More, More, More. I love it.

Cool idea, looking forward to seeing where you go with this

ah!!
quite an excellent chapter, and longer too to boot!
hoping there will be another version fo willow there :p

Great work.