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Review of chapter "Plans for the Ministry of Magic" from Ezmerelda
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I feel for Faith if you're going to be following HP canon on this one...I can only imagine her reaction when Sirius gets pushed beyond the veil!

Interesting way to re-tell the story, thanks for writing! ~"~

(sometimes, my reviews aren't even worth reading...)
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [31 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans for the Ministry of Magic" from Mommadar
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Great chapter. I was so excited to see that you updated. Keep up the brilliant work.
Review By [Mommadar] • Date [31 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans for the Ministry of Magic" from (Past Donor)Catlimere
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Love it. Sorry got behind in my reading and reviewing. I meant to review the last chapter and just got behind. Buffy seems really intent on making sure Faith and Sirius are together and stay that way. I'm wondering how much Faith knows about this plan. At first I thought she didn't know anything, but with her and Buffy both listening in on Mrs. Weasley's conversation with Hermione I'm wondering what exactly she knows. I do love the idea of a Faith/Sirius pairing. (I know you have this in general, so no planned pairing for Buffy. I didn't mean to make you feel like you needed one for Buffy. I was just thinking it would be nice for Buffy to find some happiness that doesn't die or become evil or leave or....lol)

I LOVED Buffy confronting Dumbledore on why he was avoiding Harry. I think she made a lot of valid points and while I understand Dumbledore's reasoning as well, I think Buffy's right. I can't wait to see Buffy and Faith masquerading at the Ministry. That should be fun. Looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)Catlimere] • Date [31 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans for the Ministry of Magic" from CinnamonGrrl
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I like that you've given Harry an advocate in Buffy, but also kept Dumbledore in character by refusing to reveal too much (hardly anything, really). Buffy and Bill could be a good pairing, we don't enough Billfic IMO.
Review By [CinnamonGrrl] • Date [31 Jan 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scheming" from Emmy
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I love this story so much! Excellent job, as always. :) Emmy
Review By [Emmy] • Date [25 Jan 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Wish" from Mommadar
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This is a brilliant story and I can't wait to read what is going to happen next. Keep up the great writing.
Review By [Mommadar] • Date [23 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Wish" from Emmy
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Wow. That was just ... wow. You convey Buffy's emotions beautifully and consistantly. As always, excellent job!
Smiles, Emmy
Review By [Emmy] • Date [16 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Wish" from Ezmerelda
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I'd have to go with Faith on that one. Death wish? Nah, I'm too stubborn to give in.

Great story, thanks for writing!
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [16 Jan 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Wish" from Jillian
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I love this story and I love this chapter. Wonderful. I love the flash back of Faith and the guy.... and Sirius growling. Hysterical. I really love the whole death wish part. It was written amazingly, very poetic. Each chapter is better than the next, which is simply brillant because each chapter is fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you do eventually bring Dawn to #12. It would be very interesting.
Review By [Jillian] • Date [16 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Wish" from Ithildin
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Very much enjoying this story, and looking forward to the rest.
Review By [Ithildin] • Date [16 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Wish" from CinnamonGrrl
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V. enjoyable, more insight to a character is always a good thing IMO. The theme of peace and oblivion is the same I was exploring in TGoD because not a lot of people want to address it-- glad to see you didn't shy away. You handled it deftly, too. Good job.

An another note, I had thought it would be Buffy/Sirius but it's now clear that he's hooked up with Faith, so is there going to be any ship with Buffy at all? Sure would love it to be Remus. He doesn't get enough love, IMO. I think they'd be a good match.
Review By [CinnamonGrrl] • Date [16 Jan 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Wish" from (Past Donor)Catlimere
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I love this story. You know this review thing won't allow me to click the recommend fic button? Hmm. Anyway, I like the "filler" chapters. While I love the action, it's nice to see more about the characters involved. It's funny, I never considered Faith having more innocence than Buffy. I think you're dead on with that though. Having died twice, feeling the peace and joy of heaven and then being ripped out of their by your friends...it's going to rip away your innocence, your faith in happily ever after anyway. Hard to believe in heaven as a permanent reward when you can be torn away from it. Buffy doesn't even have the reassurance that once you die it's all over. Very poignant moment. I bet it's something Faith never considered about Buffy either. I really like them getting closer.

Loved Faith taking on and out the wizard during her introduction to the order. Very well done. I also liked Snape's reaction to Faith when he arrived. ROTFL at Buffy's thought of Snape in pink robes and doing ballet. I'm never going to get that picture out of my head. I'm going to end up being locked up in a mental ward as I snicker to myself all day long. :)

Nice to see Buffy opening up more with the kids anyway. She needs people to talk to, to make some connections with. I also like Faith and Sirius hooking up. One less love sick puppy for Buffy to worry about. (No pun intended on his animagus form. Although now I think about it, I'm cracking myself up. Definite loony bin trip in my future.) Anyway, I think Sirius and Faith are good together. She can definitely inject some fun and life into his existence and I think he can help keep her grounded. I like the pairing. (Of course I'm assuming they are hooked up, lol.)

Can't wait to see what happens next. I had forgotten about Harry's trial.
Review By [(Past Donor)Catlimere] • Date [16 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Wish" from Norwegianne
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Good story. I especially enjoyed Sirius' growling. Well-written and funny.

About the brit-speak... don't worry. I figure there are a very large number of American fanfiction writers mangling the Harry Potter speak. Not that I noticed anything odd.
Review By [Norwegianne] • Date [16 Jan 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Little Words" from RoseRiddle
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WOW! this is the best fic I've read in a long, long time. this is fantastic! Faith is my favourite character and everything. Awww, i thought Buffy was gonna end up with Sirius. who do you have in store for Buffy...is Angel making a reappearance? anyway, PLEASE keep going, this is brilliant!
Review By [RoseRiddle] • Date [14 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Little Words" from Maineiac
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Another good part. I liked the interaction between Buffy and Faith, seeing them work through some off their problems. They both feel guilt for past actions against the other that needed to be addressed. I am wondering is now that they are back in the Orders house if it will prevent the First from working its mojo on our reformed slayer, or will she still be in danger of hurting those around her. Please keep up the good work.
Review By [Maineiac] • Date [11 Jan 04] • Not Rated
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