Hey I really liked this chapter the first time...the second is kind of redundant. (sorry joke cuz the same chapter was updated as chapter 3 and 4.) Still it was good. I am really looking forward to the real chapter 4. Please continue when you can.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Sorry about that. Trying to upload the chapter quickly as my laptop was dying at the coffee shop. But I enough power to fix it. AND respond to this review.
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
totally cool....a little gory....but hey its a mergence of Biffy/Anita....gory is expected right???
i really like the bar scene between Luthor and Buff.....it was funny....plus Anita being all stern with Buffy being "too young" and of course B pissing her off as only she can....totally infuriating i tell ya! LOL
once again a truly enjoyable update......so wish you could do it more often!!! **hint, hint**
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I am glad you're enjoying the story. I will update as soon as possible, but I am currently writing three stories and am only able to update one chapter or so total per week between all three. So I update whichever one gives my creative juices the most buzz. 8)
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [8 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
greywiz asked some really pertinent questions......though i don't believe Amy was the one who became invisible from being bored or ignored....her name was something else, though right now it escapes me.......anyway
the meeting between B and G was freaking funny....and i concur....Buffy so deserves a cookie!!
and you do too!! thanks for updating......do it again real soon please
Comments from author:
Marcy was inviso girl. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [22 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Well, you've definitely caught my attention with the first two chapters.
Are the rest of the Scoobies going to showing up?
Will Xander end up as a were-hyena or some other lycanthropic breed? And if Xander does retain lycanthropic tendencies, how will being exposed to the swim team coach's mutagenic sauna to make his team more fish-like affect him?
Will Willow actually get training in her witch-y abilities?
Will Oz be a member of Richard's pack?
Will Amy still turn invisible from being ignored?
Will the jell-haired pedophile be making his presence known, too? He won't be all that unusual in this 'verse since ALL AB-verse vampires still have their souls and are Turned of their own free will, remember. If he does show up, he won't be able to use the brooding 'I'm so depressed and ashamed of all the deaths my soul-less self is responsible for' shtick.
Anyway, looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Muhahahaha! *Cackles evilly* You will just have to wait and see. The only absolute is that pretty much everyone from the Buffyverse that had any relevance to the show or who is just too damn fun not to play with will eventually appear here.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [20 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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