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Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A house and onto Smallville!" from carmsfic
Review:
Wonderful start. Please post more soon I can't wait to see what kind of trouble the gang will get into as soon as they hit Smallville. Please please please post soon.
Comments from author:
I'm working on the next chapter =D thanks for your review!
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A house and onto Smallville!" from CeruleanRose
Review:
Really good story. Looking forward to more. I like how the Scoobies interact together.
Comments from author:
phew! I'm so glad to hear that I was afraid I rushed over their parts too much. thanks for the reviews!
Review By [CeruleanRose] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A house and onto Smallville!" from LordCorwin
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And just who is the man with the blue flames ... hmm
Comments from author:
*grins* just think knights of the round table.... without the knights.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A house and onto Smallville!" from Dragonelf
Review:
This story looks pretty nice so far. However Green Lantern belongs to DC Comics and not Marvel as you have written in your disclaimer.
Comments from author:
Thanks for pointing that out to me! =D I've changed it.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A house and onto Smallville!" from Bobboky
Review:
: )
Comments from author:
=D
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A house and onto Smallville!" from JoeHundredaire
Review:
To repeat what everyone else has said... beta. You need one. Desperately.
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Powers and new beginnings" from slightlyeccentric
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait to see how you incorporate the hints of Spiderman and superman into the plot. I think that the characters you have created have a lot of potential, I'm eager to see how you work in Buffy canon to reveal Xander/s metahuman abilities. If it has something to do with his lost eye I'm sure it will be an interesting ability. I hope that you update soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks!! =D I'll try
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Aftermath, Ninjas and Android" from Infinix
Review:
I have to again recommend getting a beta for this it has all kinds of potential but the spelling mistakes and off dialogue really detract from the reading experience.

Edit: The easiest place to ask is your author notes. Since Xander plays a big part in this story you could also ask at the XanderZone yahoo group. Just make sure when you ask to tell them that you don't update often.
Comments from author:
Hi Infinix =D sorry but how do you find a beta reader? It's just I don't know where to ask, and I don't want the beta reader to be put off by my infrequent updates...
Review By [Infinix] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Powers and new beginnings" from SAK
Review:
I think Buffy should be taught some of that Ninjutsu stuff, if only the basics.

Please update again soon.
Comments from author:
That's a great idea! I'll try to incorporate that in future chapters =D
Review By [SAK] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Powers and new beginnings" from Bobboky
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: )
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Aftermath, Ninjas and Android" from Ahdamnit
Review:
Only horrible things can come from Willow the unwise looking at forbidden knowledge. I fear for their world.
Comments from author:
Yeah! Who knows what she'll do with so much power *grins*
Review By [Ahdamnit] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Aftermath, Ninjas and Android" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
=D
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Aftermath, Ninjas and Android" from michaelangelo
Review:
Interesting mix of plots and sub plots, I wont hen peck you about getting a beta because I know how much of a pain it can be to find one; don't worry though because the story so far is splendid and thoroughly enjoyable, and more often than not someone will volunteer, just not me 'coz I iz krap'.

Got a few points to make though, mainly about G.L powers. From what I understand, with my limited and out of date information. The powers used to rely more on imagination and power, not on concentration. Xander would have to imagine the effect and the ring creates the effect, powers it and controls it to the will of the ring holder. Otherwise during combat all Xander would be doing is just standing there doing nothing while his constructs do everything, try and play a hand held game while walking down the street to understand what I mean.

I'm assuming running the ring on Kryptonite is like running a Lamborghini on low grade 1 star gas and Xander is having to keep a concentration to keep the constructs working so they won't spontaneously crap out, and thats why it's depleting rapidly ... thinking about it, the only unlimited green premium grade power source would be ..... *snicker* .... Oh I see where your going with this. Crafty
Comments from author:
thanks michaelangelo =D erm I hope I didn't spell your name wrongly.

hmm, I think for someone to imagine something, a certain amount of concentration will be needed theoractically to hold that imagination in the mind.

=p At least that's what happens when I imagine a story plot line. But thanks for pointing out that fact to me.

Yeah, Kryptonite is being treated like a low grade power source for now, for later ? *winks*
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Aftermath, Ninjas and Android" from Caliadragon
Review:
This was an excellent chapter, the only problem I had with it is that you made all three kids to old. In season 2 Buffy was 15, just a few months shy of her 16th B-day. Willow had just turned 15 and Xander was a few months shy of his 15th birthday. None of them turned 18 until season 4.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
oh!! sorry sorry!! =D I think you misunderstood me. Willow and Xander's Halloween persona were the ones that were eighteen years old, not Willow and Xander themselves. But thanks for the reviews!
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Aftermath, Ninjas and Android" from Dargos
Review:
good story.

Green Lantern´s force field will protect him from multi-megaton nuclear strike.Stopping Buffy´s or Rommie´s punches should be easy.
Comments from author:
thanks Dargos. Yup Xander should be fine =D In terms of power rankings right now...

1st Buffy
2nd Xander
3rd Willow

Ironic
Review By [Dargos] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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