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Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
OK, I've left enough reviews to make up for all the time I took between reviews... so this will be a big one...

There are so many good lines, I couldn't just choose one. I should hire you to funnify and weirderize my stories... And you should take that as a compliment because although I'm not particularly funny, I'm definitely, definitively, defiantly weird, and i'm a very good judge of funny!

Some of the lines that made me shriek, squee or squeal or otherwise 'emotify' (emote, if I must use actual English. Emotify is so much more interesting) in amused bemusement are: (this is kind of like the David Letterman top ten list, except I'm not sure how many will be on the list.

(I really wish that this site allowed html or had buttons for italics, bold, emoticons, etc)

The winners are:

"Father is involved, isn't he? Of course something will go wrong."
(giggles. I feel this way about some of my relatives!)

Angel's last words were, "I can't believe I'm going to be done in by movie characters."
(I actually felt sorry for Angel)

"Glory? Okay, most of her major organs made it safely. Just as I promised."
(no one feels sorry for Glory!)

None of the survivors chose to go to the police.
(No, really? Now, why am I unsurprised!)

Kendra was coming out of her isolationist shell and becoming a person
(this... brilliant!)

Perhaps they couldn't face the truth that cooked demon tasted a lot better than most of the school's lunches. Best Sloppy-Joe ever.
(yuck, giggle, yuck again.)

Only quibble I have is that you pretty much wrote the slayers and Giles out of the story, and made it a bit of a super!Xander!family story... but it was beyond funny, so I'll forgive you. I would have given you a ten for more Buffy and Kendra... Oh well, you got a rec. You'll survive it! ;-P

And you did manage to get Nixon and candy canes into the same image... that was kind of... mind twisty! ;-)

Thanks for a very good time!

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [11 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Best author note ever:

AN: Sorry for the long delay. I blame my muses. Instead of inspiring me, they were busy staging naked jello wrestling. How they got the jello naked, I'll never know.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [11 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
"the interior had gone from a 'white trash' look to a 'black magic' one"

Your clever use of contrasts is a bold and original one! Oh, who am I kidding, that's priceless! And add a 'Lurch-like Dodge in a french maid's uniform and that's just brilliant... enough to make my head explode... from laughter.

Lovely imagery!

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [11 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Well, my excuse is that I didn't read the last chapter when it was posted, so I took the opportunity to reread this gem... just because... and I just can't say enough about the funnies...

And lines like this aren't bad either:

"I bet vampires would love to have their own blood fountains."

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [11 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Edman
Review:
Good and funny story.
Review By [Edman] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from TheKnightofFaerie
Review:
That was sick, twisted, highly disturbing, and really funny. Perfect for the Adams Family.
Review By [TheKnightofFaerie] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Shadowman
Review:
Weird but interesting and funny I loved it.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [27 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
This gets my official Rib-Cracking Rating. I laughed so muc it STILL hurts!!! I'll put a watch on this author just in case they ever put up a sequel! Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from garrycooper
Review:
This is a story that should grow. I loved it! I cracked up laughing when it Jessica's cooking. Please keep writing.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Morgomir
Review:
Great ending. Good luck with whatever you decide to do next. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
I could see Willow going borglike, so yeah, this all kind of worked for me, except she misses out on the real-life Tara loving. That one made me a bit sad. But that said, all in all, enjoyable. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from SaiyaSith
Review:
OMG! That is the absolutely the funniest things I've read all year!!! Bravo! Excellent job!!!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from LFW
Review:
Thanks for more of this fic
I am very pleased with sister Dawn and not sure what to think of Borg queen Willow . . . except neat creation and nice writting
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Genuka
Review:
You Do realize that you are terribly terribly evil, yes? This made me laugh so hard! EVILNESS!!!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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