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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheDon
Review:
there needs to be a sequel to this. leavin us hangin like that, for shame lol
Comments from author:
Well, if I can get my muse to cooperate, there will eventually be one. ;-)
Review By [TheDon] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GundumM
Review:
nice ficy
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [GundumM] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from windrider
Review:
Okay I generally love your stories and this is one that is of the good too. I noticed a few typos but since i can't type or spell i can't cast any stones (you know glass houses and such). Any way loved coyote alpha and sorry i missed this little story but i just recently realized you about tracking and such. Any way this series though short in number of stories is a fave of mine and you have left things and hinted at great things to come. So hopefully you muse will come off strike and let you work some more on this and of course my other fav of your's We don't need no stinking prophecies.

Keep up the good work
Windrider lurker and sometime reviewer.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story and appreciate your reviewing it.

I've just finished the first draft of the next chapter of 'Prophecies' and will be sending it out to my beta-readers later in the week, once I've gone over it again, so you should be seeing it in about two weeks or so. (No promises on the exact time frame, mind you, 'cause that's something I really can't control.)
Review By [windrider] • Date [27 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nightray
Review:
coolness.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I see you found it. ;-)
Review By [Nightray] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Obsidian
Review:
Very well done. I was wondering if you where going to do a YAHF story. And I'm glad you did. you did it justice.

Now keep going... please. I can't wait to see whats going to happen next.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have some definite ideas about what changes are going to be happening, especially as concerns Graduation. ;-)

Just have to find the time to write them out.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jonakhensu
Review:
Considering Janus called Coyote 'Lo', I'm going to hazard a guess and say it's a diminutive for Loki, Norse god of Chaos. Anyways, great series. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, and you're right on the money about the nickname. No idea when the next segment of this story might show up, though.
Review By [Jonakhensu] • Date [6 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from anpu
Review:
Excellent story. Thank you for honoring Robert E. Howard(even though I don't like his characters getting killed), including Captain America, and treating Marcie with dignity and respect.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate hearing from you.

Solomon Kane was about my least favorite of REH's characters, what with him being basically so humorless and dour, but I still liked him. I also think that he would choose to go out in just that fashion when confronted with a situation like Ethan set up.

I also kinda regret that Joss never did anything more with Marcie as a character. She had all sorts of potential, as I was trying to show in both 'Coyote Alpha' and 'Dressed For Success.'

And, of course, Cap is Cap. What more need be said about him?

Thanks again for reviewing.
Review By [anpu] • Date [4 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
I loved the newest installation to the Coyote series and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear that. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MinaLynn
Review:
Ok seriously? There has to be more of this, please? Do you think you'll write more from this idea? It was really quite good.
Comments from author:
Well, I do have further plans for the Pack; it's just a matter of getting them written and posted. Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Satori
Review:
“Yeah, and to make it all completely opposite, Dawn’ll be the charming and charismatic team leader,” Buffy snipped with a satisfied grin.

“Exactly,” Dawn eagerly nodded her agreement, before the full impact of Buffy’s comment sank in. “Hey!” she said indignantly a moment later.

Priceless. Buffy snark = good.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked that line. I couldn't see Buffy letting something like that slip by and not saying it. ;-)

Sisterly snark is always good. ;-)
Review By [Satori] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
* having a heart attack *
" Lo" Lo as in Loki? With Janus? Oh, my. Now that's a match made ... no where NEAR heaven ...
Comments from author:
Yep, you got it! ;-)

Just consider the possibilities... then run away as fast as you can. ;-)
Review By [banner] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ghostwhowalks
Review:
Argh

I just spent 20 to 30 minutes writing what I thought was a well thought out and slightly funny review. The computer ate it. I may attempt a rewrite of it when

a) I no longer want to put my fist through the computer and
b) I have the time to do it properly.

Until then just the highlights:

I loved it for a lot reasons but

WARREN MEARS AS SOLOMON KANE ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND!

No really I loved it, completely to your usual high standards

Thank You
Bob
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. ;-)

As for the question regarding my sanity - as far as my family is concerned, I woudl say that the answer you'd get would be: OF COURSE HE IS!!!

Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Review By [ghostwhowalks] • Date [2 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
*LOVE* this series - really looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. More stories about the Pack in the future.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rothos
Review:
Good series, I'd like to see more in the same vein. Especially their activities after the second and in Xander's case third possession.
Comments from author:
Well, I do have plans for the Pack, and you'll see the effects that their costumes had on them in future stories. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [rothos] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yamaban
Review:
Good one!
I'm just slightly depressed that the story is finished. It would be a good start for a longer work.
Thanks, yamaban out.
Comments from author:
Not to worry, there will be more stories in this 'verse. I'm just not sure exactly when.
Review By [yamaban] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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