Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from amusewithaview
Review:
Want to read it? WANT to READ it?! Are you freaking kidding me?!
OF COURSE I WANT TO READ MORE OF IT! This is great! I have never read a Harmony-Halloween story before, and I absolutely adore this one! Definitely worth continuing, *nodnod* yup.
Danke
PS: One thing... mebe change the title? It's a little.. clunky? How about... Harmony, Sex-Goddess? Or something a little more salacious perhaps?
Comments from author:
Well of course *YOU* want to read it; it's all YOUR fault! (In a roundabout way of course.) You post the challenge, Joe writes 'Purrfection' for you, then encourages me to write something in the same 'verse... it's a domino effect that produces fic for you! (o_O) Hm. Wonder how I can make that happen for ME? ^_^
--This is great! I have never read a Harmony-Halloween story before, and I absolutely adore this one! Definitely worth continuing, *nodnod* yup.--
Aw, thanks! It's kinda looking like I will continue it, though I still haven't heard from Joe. (Kinda curious to know what he thinks of it--I suspect he'd given up on me actually following through with my threat to write this....)
And hey! I LIKE my clunky title!
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Very nicely written story about an underused character.
Comments from author:
Thank you, kind sir!
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from DaveTurner
Review:
Excellent!
You know I've never read a Halloween fic, and I'm not into comics so why I read this I don't know. But I'm glad I did. Great stuff, felt so sorry for Harm at the beginning (and I was so mean to her in a recent fic of mine). Will she get her revenge on Cordy and evil boyfriend (such a cad!)? i hope so.
Hope you do write more.
All the best, DaveT.
Comments from author:
--Excellent!--
Thanks!
--You know I've never read a Halloween fic, and I'm not into comics so why I read this I don't know.--
Well, I've never written a Halloween fic (not this sort, anyway), and it turns out people liked it, so that was a good thing too.
--But I'm glad I did.--
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [DaveTurner] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Dmitri
Review:
Interesting spin on the Halloween episode, and Harmony does deserve her face in the spotlight as well. Still, what she's going to do now? Take over Sunnydale or what?
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Where does Harmony go from here? ::Looks around in surprise as Buffy Musical soundtrack starts to play::
I've got some ideas forming. Taking over Sunnydale.... Maybe, maybe not. There might be more interesting things to do than fight the stupid White Hats over something like that.
The revenge of Harmony! It's wonderful. I can't wait to see her deal with her mother and Cordy. Please continue
Comments from author:
Revenge? No way! Harmony's much too mature and stuff to indulge such crass desires as revenge, now that she's housing the power and personality of a goddess known for... um... sort of.... o_O Okay, so Amora basically spends ALL her time indulging her desires, including revenge. So... there you go.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Yes, do please continue. This is an original idea for a very overlooked character.
Comments from author:
Not so original an idea, actually; this is completely inspired by and an emulation of, Joehundredaire's story 'Purrfection', which is about Cordy and the other girls getting the powers of their superhero characters/costumes... and then getting to keep them. So... go and read his story! In his version, by the way, Cordy isn't nearly the bitch she is in mine, but then he likes her, and I never have. o_O
Thanks for the review, though. I'm feeling much encouraged!
Review By [Arjai] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Mcspender
Review:
Dude, this is amazing!!!. You really make feel sorry for Harmony and her life, and yeah, I wanna read more about Harmony, the Goddes of magick =D.
See ya!!
Comments from author:
Amazing? O_O! Hm! I can live with that! ^_^
(Actually, though, she's a magical goddess, not a goddess of magic... if that matters... which I suppose it doesn't. Ahem.)
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great story. As previous reviewer said I felt sorry for Harmony (something I never thought I would). And now I'm waiting for the next chapter like a man in jail is waiting for his release.
//Klyk
Comments from author:
Harmony IS kinda sweet, in her well-meaning, ditzy way, isn't she? I was a little surprised myself.
Another chapter... yeah, I think I'll do one.
Thanks for sharing your take on this.
Review By [Klyk] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Kiwikatipo
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I liked this story a lot even though I'm unfamilar with Marvel comic characters you explained who Harmony was dressed as well enough for me to follow the story. Well done.
Harmony's family life and pig boyfriend- you love torturing your heroines don't you?
Edit! Hey I just had a paragraph written saying how that above sentence was said with a wink and a smile and I encourage you to write more about other characters because I enjoyed that story and the thing deleted my paragraph!!!
I hope you get my edit.
Comments from author:
Drat! I'd thought about adding links to some wikipedia pages on the characters, for those who weren't familiar with them, and maybe a pic or two, but didn't do it. Well, if you say you enjoyed it anyway then I guess it's okay.
--Harmony's family life and pig boyfriend- you love torturing your heroines don't you?--
I guess so. Unhappy people are much more interesting to write about than the happy ones.
(Got the edit: no worries!)
Review By [Kiwikatipo] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from CPTSkip
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I don't think I've read another Helloween story with Harmony at the center. I really like this one. You made me feel sorry for her and now I want her to kick some football player butt. But who were Indy and Lara and are they still her thralls? I hope you write more as I really want to read more about the Sorceress Harmony. Now that is a sentence I never thought I'd write. Lol!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you felt some sympathy for Harm; she really does MEAN well... in her sort of dim way. Indy and Lara? Who were they? Hm. I hadn't really thought about it, since they were just one-shot characters. Now, though, since you asked, I'm sort of curious about it myself. Don't be surprised if that comes up in a later chapter. Thanks!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Me three! I'd love to see this continue! Please tell me she managed to kill all of the people who were so mean to her in the chaos of that night...
Comments from author:
Wow! Those people really got on your nerves, huh? (mine too, actually ^_^)
Nope, she didn't kill them Halloween night (though a few blameless costume-spell victims did die at her hands, including Terminator-guy, and all the zombies her minions killed while defending her). The question now is what DOES she do to mom, and dickish-boyfriend, and even Cordelia and the others. Killing is a little extreme, given the offenses, isn't it? Or is it? ::Ponders:: Not sure. So I guess Harmony isn't sure either, at this point. Sounds like something to explore.
Review By [JanessaRavenwood] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from purrfus
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Wow.
Harmony is so rarely utilized as anything other than a throw away that even with the summary this story was a surprise. A really wonderful one. The goddess chosen and the situations created or hinted at have a great deal of potential. Please don't let it go to waste.
Comments from author:
I've never really given her much thought before, but there IS some good potential for stories with Harm, I think. Amora, as pretty much her exact opposite, should push her in some interesting directions.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated