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Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from SamJames
Review:
Very nice. It's good to see a new story from you. Happy halloween.

But if she looks and acts so different, how can she convince her parents and the school that she's really herself?
Comments from author:
Hey, man!
::Waves::

I'm going to have to think about what's next for Harm, but the visual shouldn't be hard to mess with, given a specialization in Illusion magic.
Her actions, and reactions, will be harder to hide... assuming she wants to do so.
Review By [SamJames] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from PATM
Review:
you've got to continue this story! Harmony's character is being pushed down a rut
in so many fan stories that I wonder why they even bother to use her. This time I
think she is either delusional or truly the Goddess reborn.
Comments from author:
You're suggesting that the Amora personality is the result of some kind of...psychotic break?
That Harmony couldn't endure things as they were, at least, as herself, so she created an 'Amora'-self to deal with things?

(o_O)

That's actually kind of interesting.
Not, perhaps, what's actually going on the story... at least not completely, but it COULD figure into things later... sort of.

(You guys keep prompting nifty ideas with your comments--that's pretty cool!)
Review By [PATM] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from CJNyfalt
Review:
Interesting. I will track this one.
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from JoeDineen
Review:
Interesting take on Harmony and equally interesting to see a fairly light hearted story from you.
Comments from author:
'Lighthearted'???

This poor girl is basically suffering constant emotional abuse from every quarter, and it's lighthearted?
o_O

Gee, my usual stuff must be even more grim than I thought.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from SamDragon
Review:
Amara on the Hellmouth is scary enough but Harmony with her powers.WOW.Need more.
Comments from author:
Okay then.
More you shall have.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Neat story.
Comments from author:
^_^!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from amusewithaview
Review:
Want to read it? WANT to READ it?! Are you freaking kidding me?!

OF COURSE I WANT TO READ MORE OF IT! This is great! I have never read a Harmony-Halloween story before, and I absolutely adore this one! Definitely worth continuing, *nodnod* yup.

Danke

PS: One thing... mebe change the title? It's a little.. clunky? How about... Harmony, Sex-Goddess? Or something a little more salacious perhaps?
Comments from author:
Well of course *YOU* want to read it; it's all YOUR fault!
(In a roundabout way of course.)
You post the challenge, Joe writes 'Purrfection' for you, then encourages me to write something in the same 'verse... it's a domino effect that produces fic for you!
(o_O)
Hm. Wonder how I can make that happen for ME?
^_^

--This is great! I have never read a Harmony-Halloween story before, and I absolutely adore this one! Definitely worth continuing, *nodnod* yup.--

Aw, thanks!
It's kinda looking like I will continue it, though I still haven't heard from Joe. (Kinda curious to know what he thinks of it--I suspect he'd given up on me actually following through with my threat to write this....)

And hey! I LIKE my clunky title!
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Very nicely written story about an underused character.
Comments from author:
Thank you, kind sir!
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Elric
Review:
The though of Harmony with that Much power just scares me. You are Demented to write a story like this one. I loved it, more please.
Comments from author:
--The though of Harmony with that Much power just scares me.--

It IS kind of terrifying, isn't it?
^_^

Thanks for reviewing; a little encouragement goes a long way towards inspiring a sequel.
Review By [Elric] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Excellent!

You know I've never read a Halloween fic, and I'm not into comics so why I read this I don't know. But I'm glad I did. Great stuff, felt so sorry for Harm at the beginning (and I was so mean to her in a recent fic of mine). Will she get her revenge on Cordy and evil boyfriend (such a cad!)? i hope so.

Hope you do write more.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
--Excellent!--

Thanks!

--You know I've never read a Halloween fic, and I'm not into comics so why I read this I don't know.--

Well, I've never written a Halloween fic (not this sort, anyway), and it turns out people liked it, so that was a good thing too.

--But I'm glad I did.--

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Dmitri
Review:
Interesting spin on the Halloween episode, and Harmony does deserve her face in the spotlight as well. Still, what she's going to do now? Take over Sunnydale or what?
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Where does Harmony go from here?
::Looks around in surprise as Buffy Musical soundtrack starts to play::

I've got some ideas forming. Taking over Sunnydale....
Maybe, maybe not. There might be more interesting things to do than fight the stupid White Hats over something like that.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Sandi
Review:
The revenge of Harmony! It's wonderful. I can't wait to see her deal with her mother and Cordy. Please continue
Comments from author:
Revenge?
No way!
Harmony's much too mature and stuff to indulge such crass desires as revenge, now that she's housing the power and personality of a goddess known for... um... sort of....
o_O
Okay, so Amora basically spends ALL her time indulging her desires, including revenge.
So... there you go.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Arjai
Review:
Yes, do please continue. This is an original idea for a very overlooked character.
Comments from author:
Not so original an idea, actually; this is completely inspired by and an emulation of, Joehundredaire's story 'Purrfection', which is about Cordy and the other girls getting the powers of their superhero characters/costumes... and then getting to keep them.
So... go and read his story!
In his version, by the way, Cordy isn't nearly the bitch she is in mine, but then he likes her, and I never have.
o_O

Thanks for the review, though. I'm feeling much encouraged!
Review By [Arjai] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Mcspender
Review:
Dude, this is amazing!!!.
You really make feel sorry for Harmony and her life, and yeah, I wanna read more about Harmony, the Goddes of magick =D.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Amazing?
O_O!
Hm! I can live with that!
^_^

(Actually, though, she's a magical goddess, not a goddess of magic... if that matters... which I suppose it doesn't. Ahem.)
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'The Origin Story'" from Klyk
Review:
Great story.
As previous reviewer said I felt sorry for Harmony (something I never thought I would).
And now I'm waiting for the next chapter like a man in jail is waiting for his release.

//Klyk
Comments from author:
Harmony IS kinda sweet, in her well-meaning, ditzy way, isn't she?
I was a little surprised myself.

Another chapter... yeah, I think I'll do one.

Thanks for sharing your take on this.
Review By [Klyk] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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