Yes! I'm excited -- I've been waiting for the third enstallment of this series for a long time! :D
I love that you included the Vampire Council in this. I can't wait for Faith to get involved with the vampire world (outside of mattress mambo moments with Damien... though those are fun too! ;] ) and interact with the Vampire Council. Sparks are about to fly!
Review By [whoadreambig] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Another intriguing start and again a sensible, in character, extrapolation of what events might logically follow the events of the first story. I really enjoy the pacing and the plotting of these fics greatly. Thanks!
One small thing : "Faith had a lot of practice with that emotion, but it didn’t get any easier with practice." You used 'practice' twice there, whereas maybe 'experience' would have worked better in one of them.
Comments from author:
Thanks for noticing. I corrected that little repetition. Glad to hear you like the first chapter.
Review By [Booster] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated