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Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from PATM
Review:
Rereading the whole story it has been so long. Digging in now. This one took a long time to
come back,fantastic! update soon please.
Review By [PATM] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from Bunney
Review:
a good step forward :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from Bobboky
Review:
nice, I think that either she should take X with her or have him follow her and find her somehow
Comments from author:
Well, considering she put him to sleep and they don't know for how long, I suspect Xander won't be following her. And it's not going to be the safest journey chasing after her.

Thanks for the comment.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from JoeDineen
Review:
Well, now a story is coming togther. I look forward to more, what is calling Willow and so forth.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from DarkTopaz
Review:
this should be intresting
Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from mithrilandtj
Review:
Okay... I'm abit confused.
Was Willow *really* on Jack's deck in the 1st chapter?
Or was he just seeing a vision of some sort?
Comments from author:
You mean in the prolog? Yes. She was really there.

The next few chapters occur before it and explain how she got there and when we get back to the cabin (possibly in chapter 4) things will begin moving forward again.
(The technique is either 'In medias res' or 'flashforward' - depending on how things progress after we get back to the cabin :-). Either the prolog is a flashforward or the next few chapters are a flashback. Either way will work :-). OR your idea of it all being a vision also works though it hadn't occurred to me.)

Guess I need to make a mention of it in the notes at the beginning.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from fanfictionfanatic
Review:
I love how in character you are keeping everyone. Great back story on how Willow came to be on the dock. I can't wait to read more.
Review By [fanfictionfanatic] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from windsorw
Review:
Always good to see a new chapter of any of your stories. Interesting set up with Willow and the folks in Sunnydale, and I like the direction this seems to be going. Hopefully Willow will find some of what she needs -- peace, friends, a chance to heal.
Review By [windsorw] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from Wormbait
Review:
Nice. The first chapter I took the bait and the second you started to reel me in nicely. (Sorry there was a fishing add on TV as I was typing that.)

I like the detail you've managed to capture without letting it get too in depth, and the characters are well written.

I also like the way it doesn't feel rushed, like so many fics nowadays, with the writers so eager to get to the action, fearing they'll lose the readers attention. You have no fear of that here, very intriguing start.

looking forward to more and thanks for sharing.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
I'm not sure what is the more amazing:

a) That there exists such a thing as International Femslash Day

or

b) It wasn't JoeHundredaire's idea

Guess I better add some femslash to the plot bunny I just encountered. Good to see the fic reawakened.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from pezgirl
Review:
love it!
can't wait to see what happens next (:
Review By [pezgirl] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silently slipped away..." from arkeus
Review:
ah, thanks for updating this fic, as it was maybe my fav of yours. i really like the theme. Hopefully you won't do yourCouncilTrained!Willow fic though:/

XD

Loving this so far. Clever Willow, uh!
Review By [arkeus] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bunney
Review:
You need to add more...it might be good :) i wanna read it

later and love
bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [28 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Interesting beginning.

Please do more.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [26 May 08] • Not Rated
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