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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
Last line is confusing, but I'm looking forward to more. Hopefully Xander cleaning Tim's gun means that he didn't die. Can Xander call and give the new Council the ultimatum that he's moving to Miami and will take care of that area since he's sick of being ignored or taken advantage of when he's with them in London?
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. I don't know were I going with the story yet. We'll have to wait and see.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
Tim took the gun back and did not hear from Speed again that night.

Um, that's a little confusing. But other than that I love the idea here. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'll fix that. I don't have a bata so did not catch that

O and thanks for reading
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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