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Review of chapter "3" from banner
Review:
I'm delighted that you've chosen to continue this one! It always seemed to have so many possibilities. With a Buffy, Xander, and Willow about as far from canon as possible at that age, you can take this so many places.
Comments from author:
true. not sure how much further it is going, though.
Review By [banner] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
Oh. Great to see another chapter. Please keep up the good work. I am curious to see where this is going. Thanks!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from TheDon
Review:
who are they supposed to be? i mean i have no idea who they dressed as except for death stroke. anyways i hope you continue this story soon

-The Don
Comments from author:
Deathstroke, Deathstrike, Cassandra Caine and Lady Shiva.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from GundumM
Review:
gave me a couple of laughs
Review By [GundumM] • Date [16 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from ReaperCB
Review:
Amazing so far, and I can't wait to see where you're going to go with it... the only flaw I see isn't so much a flaw as a personal choice I would have made... Five contracts, and Janna as one of the assassins. A little smooth talking from Deathstroke and Deathstrike, and you had such a potential for the "Return of Ripper", even if you only brought Ripper back as "the handler" for the team.You get to see so few flashes of Giles with Ripper's edge in the series, seeing an author who could have done that particular character justice and not using him is a crime in my opinion. That being said, everything else is wonderful and I can't wait to see Travers F*** up and get himself killed.
Comments from author:
Not sure where I'm going to go with it either - it's an old idea hashed out between another author and I, one about a year or so in the making, but nothing as to where it could go.
Review By [ReaperCB] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from DeaconKrow
Review:
Hey I just found this story in the list of stories I've fallen behind on. I really like the premise and also like the fact that a little of the original characters are beginning to poke their heads out... While sticking to cannon isn't a really big issue for me I like it when some of cannon stays in. Hope to read more.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from jessie
Review:
Man, I gotta say that this is the darkest, most wonderfully, written piece of Halloween Buffy that I've read thus far. I love what you have up until this point and I hope you plan on updating soon. Or at least, I hope you're planning on updating because this piece is number one in my book.
Comments from author:
I plan on updating, yes, but first I have to get the muses interested in it again. Fickle creatures...

Thanks.
Review By [jessie] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from KingDarius
Review:
good story so far, I'm guessing deathstrike is from marvel and deathstroke from DC? and as for the true head of the council, are you trying to put something like the knights of the round table in Hellsing together?
Comments from author:
You'd be right as to the first, but as to the second, I never liked the fact that Travers had that much power, so I'm putting him a little lower on the food chain. Mr. Jonas is an OC, but he'll be fun.
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from OLazyOne
Review:
Excellent.

Well, I would normally offer my guess. . .but the truth is. . I cheated and read the reviews.

Nicely done. I can't wait for more info about who 'Mr. Jonas' is and how the assassins match up against each other. Although now that I think about it, I've completely stopped thinking of the characters as anything other than their assassin persona's. If that wasn't your intention then you might want to show how the characters are still the same somehow.
Comments from author:
Thanks... CHEATER! (kidding)

As for Mr. Jonas, he'll be a background character... but he'll actually do something where as, say, Angel just skulked.

As for the characters, yes, this so far has been the intent, but in the next chapters you'll see some of their original personalities come out. Given the nature of their new personalities, this shouldn't be surprising, though.
Review By [OLazyOne] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from yamaban
Review:
First: Please, more! (As your time allows)
Second: Great work, the fine lines danced here are rich: in sarcasm, wit, style, and humor.
Third: Jenny is the cherry on top of this.
Fourth: Will Giles survive his coming bout with alcoholism, as least with his liver intact?

Last but not least: Thanks, it made me laugh after an hard day.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Well, as he's not Irish, he doesn't have that edge when it comes to his liver surviving, but he might...

Maybe.
Review By [yamaban] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on what you did add. Loved Willow's pun. I'm hoping to read more of the story soon.
When will we find out who Willow dressed as?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from LordCorwin
Review:
Ok .. you need to go into who's who ... as in ... I get it, they all went as assassins ... Jenny as Deathstrike .. err .. i think I got that right .. now, who'd the rest go as ... since i"m not familiar with them.... powers .. etc....
Comments from author:
Xander: Deathstroke the Terminator. DC.
Jenny: Deathstrike. Marvel.
Buffy: Cassandra Cain. DC.
Willow: Lady Shiva. DC.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from Jonathansicari
Review:
Still liking the story. Given this I'm going wholeheartedly with Lady Shiva for Willow now. Nice touch with the extra contract...

Looking forward to more.

*Edit* I did not read the other chapter 2 reviews before writing this so I did not know you confirmed my guess. *I dance with glee*.

*edit once again* And thanks for going back and fixing Chapter 1. Big yay.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from ThunderGod
Review:
It is interesting, if only because you still haven;t identified all of the costumes:}

wont keep my hopes up for it to goto far before your muse wanders away...

ThunderGod
Comments from author:
As from below...

Xander: Deathstroke the Terminator. DC.
Jenny: Deathstrike. Marvel.
Buffy: Cassandra Cain. DC.
Willow: Lady Shiva. DC.

Sadly, that might be the case, but so far it's interested.
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from justapiranha
Review:
Ok I really like this, keep it up.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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