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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from GothicBianca
Review:
I cried! You made me cry. That was so good. *sniffles* I'll be tracking this, I want to read more of what you have for this. *sniffles* bye.
Comments from author:
*offers tissue*
Thank you so much for such a sweet review.. I don't I've ever made anyone cry.. well, not with writing anyway..
Thank you, really, you just made my day.
Review By [GothicBianca] • Date [12 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jonathansicari
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I've been reading this since the first chapter. Your story moves with style. Your presentation and setting skills are strong. Descriptions are excellent, I can see this unfolding on the screen of my mind as easily as in a theater or on television. Very good work.

Your ability to wrench the emotions with everything written is also a sign of a powerful writer. I cannot wait for you to finish this.
Comments from author:
Wow thanks...
I'm always afraid that I'm overdoing it with the emotions and not doing enough with the descriptions...
I'm feeling kinda giddy now.. thanks for reviewing !
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [12 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from CPTSkip
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Well, it is now official. You have ripped my heart out with this story. I just do not see how you are going to end this story without leaving your readers in a totally depressed state. But your story also rocks. I do look forward to the last chapter.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from martelcris
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I think that the Scoobies reaction is a bit mild (I stand on my "leveling the city block by block") but I like the story and I hope to see more soon.

Bye
Review By [martelcris] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WinterRayne
Review:
Dun, dun, dun, I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!!
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Stone
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Hi,

Good chapter, if a little dark. Not much into dark, but I read it if the story is written well enough, and yours is, same with Fem-slash. can take it of leave depending on the story.

Don't much like killing Buffy, but that is the bend of the story and it works. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you for writing and posting.
Review By [Stone] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from axolotl
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Don't apologise... I'm liking where this is going.. pfft daddy issues, go with it!

How are the miami csi's gonna cope with the supernatural here?
Review By [axolotl] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from dugleikoo
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No, altough the non mentoning of mothers have me concerned. What would Freud say? No, come to think of it I really don't want to know.
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is one powerful story. I really like your Faith and you've done a good job with the CSI folks. Your plot, while upsetting, is emotionally gripping and intense. But what a cliffhanger! I look forward to more of your story with great anticipation.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MarkYoung
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A question that should be answered some time soon is -- why are the cops there at all? If Dawn comes home and finds Buffy dead, she doesn't call the cops; she calls Giles/the Scoobies. The cops are not going to be able to deal with anyone/thing that could kill Buffy.

It doesn't have to be anything much -- a passing employee heard Dawn scream and called 911, maybe -- but people (inside & outside the story) are going to want to know.
Comments from author:
You know.. I've been thinking about that, too.. I'll work it in, thanks !
Review By [MarkYoung] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from dugleikoo
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I can't believe you killed buffy. And normally Faith isn't my fav person, and the idea of faith/buffy isn't my cup of tea. Plus Horatio Cane? Seriously, why don't ou just crush my kneecaps witha hammar, it would be less painfull. But I like this story. Not sure why, it has all the elements hate, but I do like it and I hpe you update..
Comments from author:
Yeah.. sorry 'bout killing Buffy? Faith/Buffy is great, fine line between love and hate and all that.. I love Horatio Caine.. don't really like David Caruso, but the character Horatio Caine is awesome ^^
I'm not really all for crushing ones kneecaps with a hammer.. maybe a good kick with ironplated combatboots but no hammer..
Finally.. thanks actually.. I thinks that's the nicest thing anyone has reviewed.. a lot of elements you hate and still you like it..
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from martelcris
Review:
Damn! you kill B...Okay you are the writer, you decide .
But.. you kill (and rape!!!) B. and there isn't any and slayers popping out every corner and storming the city ?
I half expect Darth Willow and Hyena Xander to level the city block by block with Ripper following to be sure that NOTHING escape.....
Comments from author:
Yeah.. I killed B.. and raped her.. but-but the next chapter shows the reactions of the Scoobies?
Don't know if I'll have them level the city block by block but they're not gonna just sit around...
thanks for reviewing =)
Review By [martelcris] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from KatieKat
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damn holy shit. wow thats all i can think of to say. Faith's father? damn more more post again please lol
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Satori
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oh, mod, did you just kill buffy?

EDIT: HA! i was right!
Review By [Satori] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from newt
Review:
in my head i saw Horatio doing his thing with head and sunglasses. darn good
Review By [newt] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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