When I read this little ficlet, I had so much fun that I went back and reread "Fragile Existence" and "Search and Rescue." I was up LATE last night, but it was worth every minute. Thanks for some wonderful stories...
Squee! I see you've found your fluffy side for this adorable ficlet. Very light-hearted, yet still in character. I love the fact that you've created a HP crossover, without really making the HP contingency anything other than spectators. It's original, and it seems more real. Given the fact that Jack and Dawn know the HP books, why would the take the time to talk to the fictional characters? Or even really acknowledge them. They ended up in Hogwarts because of a spell, naturally, after blaming Jack for his huge mistake, they would fokus on how to get home. The internal logic of this ficlet simply works. And how funny is it that the crossover people are just background for an argument between Jack and Dawn? You put a smile on my face, thanks. I needed that.
Lol! OK, this story may be over, but you have to admit, it is one heck of a setup for more. Poor Jack. No Scooby will ever let him live this down. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated