Review of chapter "Deja Vu" from
jadecatReview:
Good job, I loved the way you structured the chapter. I knew they had to be somewhere good but you kept the focus on Jack and Dawn until the end and then revealed "where" they were. I had to laugh. Thank you
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jadecat] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Deja Vu" from
mithrilandtjReview:
Great!
So where's the next Fragile Existence chapter?
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Deja Vu" from
LiastraLeeReview:
LOL! Love Jack and Dawn's friendship.
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LiastraLee] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]