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Review of chapter "Left Behind" from azulkan
Review:
Never thought about it before but Spike and little (?) Jack do make a great team. Looking forward to more. And as for the note. I thought it was just right.
More soon please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback. Glad you liked it.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting to Know You" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
"Well that's a hell of a thing". heheh...

Yes, well two firecrackers working for Wesley... That's painfully brilliant. After trying to keep the folks at AI under control, now he has these two... Trippy.

So what's next? Please tell me there's a next.

Is there trouble? Please tell me there's gonna be trouble... And heroes...

Big Damn Heroes... I'm fixing to read a few more lines of your story.... Hurry on up with the writin' them... please

thanks.
Comments from author:
There is a next, so I'm glad you like this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [18 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting to Know You" from Stranger
Review:
They're a pair of wallies, but a brilliant pair of wallies. I look forward to seeing more of them.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Stranger] • Date [7 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting to Know You" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What a great way of explaining how EXTREMELY appropriate the title of their new detective venture is for both Clone!Jack and Spike!
Comments from author:
I'm so glad that you liked it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting to Know You" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I very much enjoyed this chapter and I found it interesting to note that Spike seems to know that Jack is a clone, but apparently still doesn't know about the Stargate program (since Jack covered up his slip about being tortured to death multiple times). I hope you continue to write stories in this series, because I'm loving it!
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you liked this chapter. I haven't finished it yet, but I do have a 'explanation' story where Jack is 'discovered' to be a magical clone. After all, "I don't really know how it happened. I woke up one morning and I was a teenager" is the truth. And Spike, who doesn't know about the classified existence of little grey men, would assume magic.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [24 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something Investigations" from RevDorothyL
Review:
So glad you're continuing with this saga. Great partnership pairing, and I love the fact that both Jack and Spike watched "Remington Steele" at some point in their previous lives.
Comments from author:
Its one of my favorite shows. Thanks for reading.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sapience" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Short, bittersweet at times, and to-the-point. Nice!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something Investigations" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
For some reason this really makes me want to reccommend Inspectres

http://www.indie-rpgs.com/reviews/10/

http://www.indie-rpgs.com/forum/index.php?topic=22086.msg224818#msg224818

Happy Haunting :)
Comments from author:
I'll check it out.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something Investigations" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Cool.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Canadian Road Trip" from MBelasko
Review:
Love the new addition! Especially Jack's musing about his soul prior to cloning. Usually no one touches on just how badass Jack needed to be to survive the situations he's been pre-sg1 and during. Hope for more of your work. The boss is probably going to be pissed when he sees thier expense account (i.e Angel raging over the EXCESSIVE amounts of Canadian booze charged on the company card).
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. Actually their boss is Wes, not Angel. Last I knew he was still the boss of Angel Investigations during season 5 (or at least he is in my little world.)
Review By [MBelasko] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sapience" from Geyer
Review:
Very nice treatment of a very believable concern. I like the way you handled so much in such a short space, including Jack acknowledging some of the things he's done in the past and how that fits in with the soul. It was a nice touch to bring up the robots, too. I'm glad to see you're continuing this, and I'm looking forward to the next installment and the scrapes they'll be getting in to, because after all, it's Spike and Jack--how could they NOT get into trouble?
Comments from author:
You're right. There will probably be trouble. ^_^
Review By [Geyer] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sapience" from link
Review:
Like the introspective view. Glad to see knowing about supernatural helps him with his identity.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [link] • Date [1 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sapience" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I'm so glad that you're continuing this! I very much enjoyed this chapter, this is the sort of thing that I'm certain Jack has thought about quite a number of times (after "Scorched Earth" comes to mind), especially after he was cloned.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sapience" from Coldhands
Review:
Really like this. Kinda dark and introspective and hopeful all at once, plus it's one of the things I've always felt should be addressed about mini-Jack.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Canadian Road Trip" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Very cool, nice to see them coping with life :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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