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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from AndreaMaine
Review:
Hey I like this story and I wonder if you're going to continue updating it.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from TinMan
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I'm impressed by how well contacted this story is. Everything just seems to fit together when it's presented.


I've watched about 25% of the newer BSG, so I know a little of what's going on. Enough to know there's a LOT more to come. Still, it is nice to see how hard you're working to do this right without shortchanging it.
Review By [TinMan] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from Duquette
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lovely story, bit slow though.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from Cardona
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one year, a month, and several days .....
I would like to read a new chapter of this story.

Saludos
Werner M
aka
Mr. Cardona
Review By [Cardona] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from Innogen
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I miss this story! ::PING::
Review By [Innogen] • Date [5 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from BrownFinderth
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Again, tremendous story!!! I'd certainly like to read more of it, if only the author would be able to return to the storyline and pick it up again!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from Callista
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Hi,

Great story, I love the way you managed to mix BSG and Buffy in a believable way. Buffy and Dawn are in character, and I think it was a great idea to separate them. Please don't stop writing, I'd love to see what you'll do with the rest of the BSG storyline!

Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from kelvin
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i just remembered this story today and was looking to see if it had been updated lately but sadly no i hope your muse inspires you soon til then i'll just reread the 22 chapters you have so far. keep up the good work
Review By [kelvin] • Date [27 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from Oddshot
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I am hoping your Muse will make you update this interesting story soon.

A Fan Oddshot
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from Bluejello
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How the frak did I miss the first 21 chapters?!
Glad I finally stumbled upon this fic. Honestly, I think this is quite possibly one of THE best canon-events-integration crossovers I've read. Buffy and Dawn's presence changes things a lot, and yet so much stays the same. And I really, really like what you're doing with the Buffy-on-Caprica plot. I can't wait for more!
But, please, proof-read before you post and maybe get a beta. The only criticism I have for you is that the spelling mistakes and typos can really throw a reader out of your story; several times I had to stop and re-read a sentence to figure out what it was supposed to say.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from MarcusSLazarus
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Interesting start lead into a very well-written story; nice job.

Not only do you avoid the usual format for these stories by having Buffy AND Dawn fall through the portal into another reality- even if Buffy’s the only one who remembers their original lives-, but you also did a very effective job of exploring some of the resulting personal dynamics, even if Buffy’s cut off from the rest of the characters we know and only actually ‘interacts’ with Leoben.

Still, Dawn’s moments with the others more than make up for that, ranging from such moments as her presence on ‘Colonial One’ as she helps Roslin and Lee begin their initial friendship while trying to show that she can make a contribution to the current situation as well (Although I have to wonder what’s going to happen if she continues to have ‘flashbacks’ to her pre-Colonial life; the fact that she ‘sees’ Lee as Xander in those will only take her so far).

Plus, of course, Buffy’s attempts to survive on Caprica were very well-written, combining some interesting OCs with a canon character that served as a very interesting contrast to Buffy while helping her ‘establish’ herself (‘Ben’ might be a sleeper who’s not acting like a conventional Leoben, but there’s still enough of Leoben in there to help us imagine how he’d react).

Hope you update soon; if nothing else, the possibilities of Buffy and Ben meeting Helo and Sharon- or even just Ben discovering what he really is- should DEFINITELY be interesting to see more of (Although I also have to wonder how Dawn’s going to react when she learns how her ‘brother’ died and what impact that’ll have on Adama’s thoughts about her joining the fleet at this time)...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from kelvin
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very well written story i was wondering the spell that put dawn in Buffy's life is that the reason they are apart of the Adama's Family. that would explain why dawn has memories and Buffy does seen the spell was made for her
Review By [kelvin] • Date [7 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen: In and Out" from kelvin
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liked the story so far the blending of the two series is very well done. i am wondering why dawn seem to have subconscious memories of being dawn summers when Buffy has on her's and not the other Buffy's memories
Review By [kelvin] • Date [7 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One: Paint and Colors" from BrownFinderth
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Winterd certainly writes a good story here!!! I will be looking forward to the next installment with bated breath!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty: Night Terror" from BrownFinderth
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Events are proceeding! Wonder what Buffy's planning on with Ben? And what about Dawn?
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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