LOL. You are sick, siiiiiiiiiiiiiiick. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can see Faith with her attitude Want, Take, Have, Dump, she will be surprised to see someboby so much worse lol.
OMG, LMAO reading this! You are a VERY disturbed individual, and I think I'm looking forward to seeing more of this story in the future. (I'm kinda disturbed, too, in case you haven't noticed. ;-) )
Good job. (I think.)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Wow! I just happened to be looking up the word "perverted" in the dictionary and found your story there. Lol! However, not only is your story story totally perverted, it is funny enough to make me stop drinking my Mt. Dew as I read it, luckily just before I baptized my monitor with the Holy Beverage. I hope you continue this mad and wicked story as the world always needs more humor. And perversity, of course. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Not Rated
ha ha ha...I like it. One of the more unusual YAHF's out there! Sweet man please keep writing this one. That last part with Joyce ..inspired! the PTBs gotta be thinking "what have we done to deserve this..."
Review By [johnbr] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]