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Review of chapter "Salvation" from CrushedRosez
I think this is a really cool way to tell a story. I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [CrushedRosez] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take Care" from RavenMorbisk
This is an original way to tell a story...
I like it..
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Phone Call Away" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Very enjoyable!!!!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Phone Call Away" from heathenseyes
I like how Dean is clear and Faith is a little fuzzy, it makes sense. Dean would be the caller and the primary person, Faith is secondary thus she's more in the background than he would be.

I like it, my favorite chapter so far.

Comments from author:
Haha, thanks for making me feel better about the pics that way! As I wrote, I wasn't too happy about that. But now that you mentioned it, it makes sense!
Thanks for the review!
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Visions" from (Past Donor)hellmouthprincess
I really like the idea of fanart stories, enjoying this and your smallville one
Review By [(Past Donor)hellmouthprincess] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six Months" from cflat
Interesting idea. Although there was a whole lot of words for the 1st manip. I get the need for the words, but couldn't you have put the words before, around, or after the manip?
Comments from author:
Honestly, I had never seen a fanart with that the case before I did it. Now I have, but that was post-the-fact.
Edited to add: I added the manip w/out words.
Review By [cflat] • Date [23 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Salvation" from tals
Hi. I like your idea for a fanart story, but I've got to admit, that I find the excessive amounts of text displayed in the picture a little off-putting; it takes away from the picture itself. The photo-manip gets totally overpowered by the writing, which is sad, as I think it looks good. (I say "think" because it is difficult to judge the picture behind all the words). Might I suggest that you write the quotes, and/or story bits seperately from the pictures in this fanart story, so that we can appreciate and enjoy both the story-bits and the picture-bits? Again, I like your basic idea, I just think you are doing your art a diservice, by "hiding" it behind the writing.

Kind regards; Tals
Comments from author:
This is the only one like it. Initialy this wasn't going to be included, but then I relized that people wouldn't know about the story line of the episode Salvation if they hadn't seen it. So I came to terms with having to add it. So it's my first filler chapter that is needed, but not wanted. The photo-manip itself is alright although I think I could have done better had I wanted to.
Thanks for the review.

Edited to add: I added the manip w/out the words.
Review By [tals] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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