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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Nice beginning.

I liked the way you had Willow interacting with her mother. Although if she had turned her into a frog, I would have liked that, too. ;-)

Is she still involved with Kennedy? Because you didn't mention the arrogant little brat at all.

Looking forward to seeing who you're going to pair the others up with once they're in Vegas.

How old are the BtVS characters, and how long after 'Chosen' does this take place?

I ask because if Dawn is eighteen, then Vegas, casinos, alcohol, Xander and wedding chapels could make a whole lot of sense to her. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [23 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from chajalive
Yeah, a trip to Vegas, that would be fun. Looking forward to reading more. Gil as Willow's dad. Nice!
Review By [chajalive] • Date [23 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Nice first chapter. There is too few willow has another dead stories ^^

I like willow's interactions with her mother.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [23 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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