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Review of chapter "First Encounters" from Ellie
Review:
Personally I'd love to see more of this. I liked the "tingle".LOL

-Ellie
Review By [Ellie] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Encounters" from Lisa
Review:
Would be definitely interested in seeing if John ended up showing up at the vamps nest. Perhaps he was on the same trail and figured the little blonde could use a helping hand.

Watch out for your sentences, sometimes they run-on and would flow a little better by making one sentence into two or more.

Love the description that you placed in there about Jo and her appearance being so innocent, yet so far from the truth. You really packed a lot of goodness into that part. Lots was said without having to actually say it. Wonderful job!

*cough* Write more in this verse? *cough*
Review By [Lisa] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Encounters" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Damn!
And John didn't follow her?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Encounters" from heathenseyes
Review:
I love the story, I do hope you continue, it would be interesting to see how they meet up again and where it goes from there.

:)
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Encounters" from CrushedRosez
Review:
I would really like to read more, If you ever write more. I think you did a really good job.
Review By [CrushedRosez] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Encounters" from Claddagh
Review:
Oooh, I really like this! More, please?
Review By [Claddagh] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Encounters" from (Recent Donor)BuffyCharmed
Review:
Oh, please continue! I love Buffy/John interaction. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)BuffyCharmed] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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