Personally I'd love to see more of this. I liked the "tingle".LOL

-Ellie

Would be definitely interested in seeing if John ended up showing up at the vamps nest. Perhaps he was on the same trail and figured the little blonde could use a helping hand.

Watch out for your sentences, sometimes they run-on and would flow a little better by making one sentence into two or more.

Love the description that you placed in there about Jo and her appearance being so innocent, yet so far from the truth. You really packed a lot of goodness into that part. Lots was said without having to actually say it. Wonderful job!

*cough* Write more in this verse? *cough*

Damn!
And John didn't follow her?

I love the story, I do hope you continue, it would be interesting to see how they meet up again and where it goes from there.

:)

I would really like to read more, If you ever write more. I think you did a really good job.

Oooh, I really like this! More, please?

Oh, please continue! I love Buffy/John interaction. :)