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Review of chapter "Report 2" from Elleria
Review:
Is good.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Report 2" from vMures
Review:
Very enjoyable. Love how Officer Apollo is a German Shepard. Also love how you tell the story through incident reports and emails, very clever. Looking forward to reading more.
Review By [vMures] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Report 2" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Report 2" from yak
Review:
Is Officer Greenly a woman? Are we going to see Xander woo this woman with his little love-note-come-thank-you-messages after narrow brushes with death?
Review By [yak] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Report 2" from JoeB
Review:
You realize of course you have to go back and flesh these out don't you? Please?

Looking foward to more chapters.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Elleria
Review:
Very amusing.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [13 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from xman
Review:
good short, hope you get back to some of your older storys kinda waiting to see what happens with them.
Review By [xman] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Infinix
Review:
Is this going in the general direction of Jerconais' "Wild Horses" with Xander starting up an anti-demon/vamp security company? If it is it will be interesting to see your take on the idea.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from ophite
Review:
This one is fun! The end makes me wonder who else will wonder across Xander's path in this job. Really the possibilities are almost endless.
Review By [ophite] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Greywizard
Review:
This was fun. I liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Iriai
Review:
It'd certainly be interesting if Xander grew even more skilled at his job, eventually striking out on his own and making his own security company. Anyways, update soon!
Review By [Iriai] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from (Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin
Review:
Lol, love it!
Review By [(Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Bumpkin
Review:
*snerk*

I dunno, I rather like this as a one off drabble-plus. You could play with some ideas in the same vein I guess. There's nothing saying everything has to be an epic, I think short and sweet has it's high points too. :) This being a case in point. *g*

keep penning,
Marns
~pN

PS; you could send out for drabble/drabble plus prompts if you really wanted to try to get your muse started. Ask ppl to give you a line of dialoge, or a snippet of a scene to build off of?
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from angelkitty
Review:
HAHAHAHA that was great maybe something along that line where he get the dog but it is turned or something
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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