Very enjoyable. Love how Officer Apollo is a German Shepard. Also love how you tell the story through incident reports and emails, very clever. Looking forward to reading more.
Is Officer Greenly a woman? Are we going to see Xander woo this woman with his little love-note-come-thank-you-messages after narrow brushes with death?
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Infinix
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Is this going in the general direction of Jerconais' "Wild Horses" with Xander starting up an anti-demon/vamp security company? If it is it will be interesting to see your take on the idea.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
It'd certainly be interesting if Xander grew even more skilled at his job, eventually striking out on his own and making his own security company. Anyways, update soon!
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Bumpkin
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*snerk*
I dunno, I rather like this as a one off drabble-plus. You could play with some ideas in the same vein I guess. There's nothing saying everything has to be an epic, I think short and sweet has it's high points too. :) This being a case in point. *g*
keep penning, Marns ~pN
PS; you could send out for drabble/drabble plus prompts if you really wanted to try to get your muse started. Ask ppl to give you a line of dialoge, or a snippet of a scene to build off of?
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from angelkitty
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HAHAHAHA that was great maybe something along that line where he get the dog but it is turned or something
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Security Report 1" from Bobboky
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nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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