Review of chapter "What's everyone up to?" from war
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The body was hard to miss being pinned to the wall near the back exit by a pool cue.
Looks like someone made Faith cranky.
Lady Heather knows how to mess with peoples heads.
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What's everyone up to?" from tchizek
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Yes just hand the evidence over to the Feds without comment and let them make their own decisions about the weird stuff. lol, the scenes with Buffy and Xander trying to ignore each other while naked are classic. Interesting bit there at the end, I'll be interested to see where that goes...
Review By [tchizek] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Love the story, it's thoroughly engrossing. Can't wait to see the next chapter, and those after it since there just isn't enough in one chapter to satisfy me :) Of course, I say that because I just read through the entire first 16 chapters, and couldn't look away from my computer till I was done. Well, written, thank you for sharing.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back to the case" from DonSample
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Dan Tanna, there's a blast from the past.
Does he still have red 57 T-Bird?
Comments from author:
Would he drive anything else?
Review By [DonSample] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
You wouldn't want Buffy to get bored, would you? A bored Buffy gets into all kinds of trouble.
Review By [war] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's no carpet" from Greywizard
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Lady Heather is enjoying this *far* too much. ;-)
And I'm interested in seeing exactly how Gerard will express his disapproval of the Council wetworks teams trying to kill his fugitive. That would make him *very* unhappy. ;-)
Comments from author:
What can I say? Lady Heather enjoys the simple things that life delivers to her.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Hmm, interesting. It would be really, bad for the council if say the LVPD or the FBI were to run across a Council cleaner team while they were both after Buffy...really really bad. [sarcasm]it would make me so sad[/sarcasm]
Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Gerard has been known to react badly when someone tries to kill his fugitives.
Review By [tchizek] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
So---wanted by the Feds, CSI teams converging, AND the Council is dispatching networks teams. Doesn't look good for Team Buffy. They really need some help.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
If it is Faith, then I have to wonder who the next Slayer will be. Kennedy? One of the other potentials from S7? Meanwhile Cordelia is feeling the heat a bit. Maybe they can pull a double jeopardy thing. Cordelia goes in and confesses to being the one who stole the rocket launcher, fired it etc. Buffy is pardoned. Then Cordelia recants her testimony, Buffy confesses. Stand off.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
tchizek
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