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Review of chapter "1 + 1 = 5?????" from Darklight
Review:
keep the chapters coming and get some about what Faith is doing
Review By [Darklight] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1 + 1 = 5?????" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1 + 1 = 5?????" from Greywizard
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As always, I'm delighted to see another chapter of this show up, man. ;-)

Brass is going to be working on an addition to that bleeding ulcer he probably already has, and Catherine is going to work herself up into a self-righteous frenzy, and I'm delighted to see both of those things happening. ;-)

You're dropping clues that would lead us to think that the murder SCI is investigating might be Faith's, and I'm undecided as to whether it really is, since you're a good enough writer to drop red herrings in order to lead us astray in our deductions.

Anyway, as I said, it's good to see more of this, and I'm hoping we see yet another chapter soon. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1 + 1 = 5?????" from eckles
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The longer Buffy and Xander remain on the 'lamb' the more they actually start to think like fugitives. In the previous chapters it was all about the art of avoiding notice whilst at the same time maintaining a level of moral's about the various extremes they were willing to go to inorder to remain free. As they begin to notice that little-by-little all sides are slowly starting to cave in around them, they are now re-examining how far they are both willing to go. Again in this chapter, Buffy, has allowed herself to take the role of 'passanger', letting Xander out line the strategy. When Xander suggested that they might have to rob the Eriff Demon in order to secure an untraceble supply of finances, Buffy didn't even so much as bat an eye. She even took the issue one step further and volunteered a willingness to kill it to grab it's cash-stash, even though Xander hadn't made that an option. I think you could probably start looking at this as evidence on Buffy's part to do whatever she has to to keep Xander out of trouble. In alot of ways, Buffy, sees her fate as sealed. She has been convicted of Murder, if she's caught it's the Big House, no questions asked. Xander, however? In my last review I tabled the idea that Buffy was going along with what Xander was saying because she see's Xander as the one who from her perspective has the most to lose. She already knows what to expect for herself. I now recind that opinion and present the possibility that Buffy is now all about protecting Xander and to keep him from being caught. In Buffy's mind, even though everyone was kept intentionally in the dark, Xander was the only one who 'stepped-up' and took the risks upon himself to free her, even though the ability to do so was subversively provided by Giles. Xander was the one who put his whole life and freedom on the line for her without the direct asking to do so. That would earn him huge kudos by Buffy, even though she hasn't said such to him. The very least she can do is to take whatever action is needed, above and beyond, being a Slayer to keep him as safe as he is trying to keep her. Can't wait to read more. Would love to hear back from you. Wayne
Comments from author:
They already took a retainer to go after the Eriff as part of their cover as bounty hunters. They were just evaluating the possibility of actually doing the job to get the needed money. Its a demon that is endangering people so Buffy would have few qualms if any of killing it.

Other than that I find your evaluation of the circumstances quite intriguing.
Review By [eckles] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1 + 1 = 5?????" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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You know, of all your current stories, this is the one I'm following the most. More, please! :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1 + 1 = 5?????" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1 + 1 = 5?????" from grd
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I personally hope a migraine forms for anyone who seeks to bother Buffy or Xander. Magic? How about a leave them the F$&k alone message. Hoping a virus sweeps any electronic and video data they acquire. Hope any government agency that tries to get them keeps running into dead ends.

Magic, yes, hopefully, someone will see that if magic exists, then the so called evidence that convicted Buffy could also be conjurored. Hope the prosecuter gets every disease that Xan got from the Schmash tribe vengence spirit.
Review By [grd] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CSI" from eckles
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As with all your stories, I find them equally compelling and enjoyable. This one carries a great deal of descriptive background that has me wanting to applaud. First rate. With everything that is going on, I am surprised, that Buffy has been able to keep her impulsiveness in check. I almost suspect that it is due to one of two reason's.

The first is that she is blatantly aware of what her freedom has cost Xander, and as such she is very much humbled by his willing sacrifice to risk his own Prison Sentence to keep her alive and offer her a chance to reclaim her life. That she is more then willing to take a back-seat and allow him to take charge. After all, if they get caught what are they going to do? She's already been sentenced to Life without Parole. Xander's the one with the most to lose now, therefore, the choices should all be his.

The second is because Buffy realizes just how out of depth she is. Against Vampires and Demon's, yeah, she probably has a clue. But in the 'Real World' she has to admit that she lacks a certain 'street smarts', something Xander is demonstrating he seems to have an abundance of. And there is also the possibility that she is in-fact in awe at how well he has co-ordinated everything so far to keep them both moving towards their objective (Faith) for the past week and a bit without slipping up and being caught.

Very curious towards the nature of the body in their Hotel Room. Was that someone sending the pair a 'message' to get out of Sin City or was it just coincidence?

Giles made a very interesting thought bubble a few chapters back about what happens when two people of the opposite sex spend a degree of time in the others company, they will end up hating each-other or through happen stance find themselves doing the 'dance with no pants'. With how Xander has been managing himself so far, I think it is safe to say that Buffy will be starting to look at him with a different set of eyes.

Hope to hear from you.

WW
Review By [eckles] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CSI" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If it weren't for . . . . ." from Jazzibear
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This is good, good -- really first-rate stuff. I love it. There's mystery, action and humour; and clues a-plenty, likewise red herrings no doubt.

(The spellchecker objects to my spelling of humour. Tough: I'm English. I'm not so foolish to believe that either of the two languages is the superior: they're just different, and the better for it.)

Two points: the title of your excellent story comes originally from the title of a song, "Run, rabbit, run", sung by Flanagan and Allen in a show that opened in London in October 1939. Many variants have appeared since. Wikipedia has an article.

Also: The US law officers and certain military officers are Marshals. Names, given, family, geographic and so on, are Marshall. (I can imagine there being some exceptions, though. I haven't checked.)

Like other reviewers I look forward to updates; but I also know about the demands of family responsibilities, so I shall be patient. Take care.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CSI" from Cdog
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Just when I thought they were in the clear, you toss that feeling out the window.

I forgot about this story and had to go back and read the last three chapters, but I am so glad that I did.

For some reason I didn't remember this story being so intense.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CSI" from war
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“We got a hit on AFIS from the hotel,” said the tech. “Buffy Anne Summers. Convicted of murder in California and sentenced to Life. Escaped Federal custody while being transported to L.A. to face trial on weapons charges. Federal Fugitive Warrant issued. To be considered armed and dangerous.”

That's inconvenient.

Seems like Xander can't help but to get strong willed women angry at him lately(Willows). At least this time she won't know it's him to blame.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Lion's Den" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
This one was really a good read, the scenes flowed together nicely.
Thanks for what you have written!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Hope to be able to add more sometime this year but the Muse for this particular story seems to be on hiatus for the moment. That and I don't get much time to write more for any of my stories due to preoccupation of taking care of my 2 1/2 year old grand daughter.
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Lion's Den" from Greywizard
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It's always good to see another chapter of this show up, man.

I think poor Greg is gonna be blamed for not immediately realizing that 'Catherine' was an impostor, although there will be plenty of blame to go around on this whole debacle. And Brass is probably going to take this as a personal insult, and make finding their two missing 'Japanese businessmen' his top priority. ;-)

Looking forward to seeing more of this one.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Lion's Den" from CPTSkip
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Lol! Suddenly I am feeling sorry for Greg as he is probably going to become the designated scape goat when they find out the two Japanese businessmen have disappeared. Very nice update and I like the way Xander worried about screwing up the evidence chain.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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