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Review of chapter "CSI" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If it weren't for . . . . ." from Jazzibear
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This is good, good -- really first-rate stuff. I love it. There's mystery, action and humour; and clues a-plenty, likewise red herrings no doubt.

(The spellchecker objects to my spelling of humour. Tough: I'm English. I'm not so foolish to believe that either of the two languages is the superior: they're just different, and the better for it.)

Two points: the title of your excellent story comes originally from the title of a song, "Run, rabbit, run", sung by Flanagan and Allen in a show that opened in London in October 1939. Many variants have appeared since. Wikipedia has an article.

Also: The US law officers and certain military officers are Marshals. Names, given, family, geographic and so on, are Marshall. (I can imagine there being some exceptions, though. I haven't checked.)

Like other reviewers I look forward to updates; but I also know about the demands of family responsibilities, so I shall be patient. Take care.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CSI" from Cdog
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Just when I thought they were in the clear, you toss that feeling out the window.

I forgot about this story and had to go back and read the last three chapters, but I am so glad that I did.

For some reason I didn't remember this story being so intense.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CSI" from war
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“We got a hit on AFIS from the hotel,” said the tech. “Buffy Anne Summers. Convicted of murder in California and sentenced to Life. Escaped Federal custody while being transported to L.A. to face trial on weapons charges. Federal Fugitive Warrant issued. To be considered armed and dangerous.”

That's inconvenient.

Seems like Xander can't help but to get strong willed women angry at him lately(Willows). At least this time she won't know it's him to blame.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Lion's Den" from TharzZzDunN
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This one was really a good read, the scenes flowed together nicely.
Thanks for what you have written!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Hope to be able to add more sometime this year but the Muse for this particular story seems to be on hiatus for the moment. That and I don't get much time to write more for any of my stories due to preoccupation of taking care of my 2 1/2 year old grand daughter.
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Lion's Den" from Greywizard
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It's always good to see another chapter of this show up, man.

I think poor Greg is gonna be blamed for not immediately realizing that 'Catherine' was an impostor, although there will be plenty of blame to go around on this whole debacle. And Brass is probably going to take this as a personal insult, and make finding their two missing 'Japanese businessmen' his top priority. ;-)

Looking forward to seeing more of this one.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Lion's Den" from CPTSkip
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Lol! Suddenly I am feeling sorry for Greg as he is probably going to become the designated scape goat when they find out the two Japanese businessmen have disappeared. Very nice update and I like the way Xander worried about screwing up the evidence chain.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run, Buffy, Run." from FireWolfe
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Lovely update. I like the magic. I would like to see a bit more action. However the characters are interesting.

I like the fact that they coppied CSI people. Well done.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from Mechconstrictor
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Interesting story so far. I look forward to seeing more.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from starletharlot
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Yes! This is made of so much awesome! I love this fic! Eagerly awaiting more!
Review By [starletharlot] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from Pointer
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"via the hotel’s security cameras and the computer records showing we haven’t used our card keys"

Note: While a big Los Vegas Hotel may very well log you in and out of your room, ours does not. Security cameras, sure. No computer logs. No computer involved for that matter. Not without very special equipment to access something the size and shape of a brick.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the info. I'll have to think about whether the hotel they're staying in has the computer records Xander/Takei presumed they did or if that is just something Brass is planning on using to get the info he wants from them.
Review By [Pointer] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from AllenPitt
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Won't Sunnydale be somewhat going straight to hell with no slayer around? Not to mention the mayor is getting closer to his Ascension. (sometime in May or June?) Even with a super quick trial it's got to be no more than a few months away.
The Mayor is definitely doing well out of all this. Sure Giles, Willow, Oz can do research & stuff, but... no Anya to help them out on what an ascension is (she was found by Xander)... Wesley will be useless...things look bad for Our Heros.
The whole "fingerprints say Buffy Summers, but that's not anything like how this guy looked" should be fun.
Comments from author:
Things are definitely going to get tight.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from CPTSkip
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Excellent update. I thought you captured Brass perfectly.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from war
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talk about some bad luck.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from grd
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I really hope they can sneak past this and the investigators into confusion when they try to piece things together. No way could fugitive Buffy look like an oriental man despite what prints say. Machine must be faulty and someone screwed up the database! I can hear it now. Perhaps Willow can aid the confusion with some computer magic.
Comments from author:
The fingerprints will definitely leave the science minded a bit lost.
Review By [grd] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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