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Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from Mechconstrictor
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Interesting story so far. I look forward to seeing more.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from starletharlot
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Yes! This is made of so much awesome! I love this fic! Eagerly awaiting more!
Review By [starletharlot] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from Pointer
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"via the hotel’s security cameras and the computer records showing we haven’t used our card keys"

Note: While a big Los Vegas Hotel may very well log you in and out of your room, ours does not. Security cameras, sure. No computer logs. No computer involved for that matter. Not without very special equipment to access something the size and shape of a brick.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the info. I'll have to think about whether the hotel they're staying in has the computer records Xander/Takei presumed they did or if that is just something Brass is planning on using to get the info he wants from them.
Review By [Pointer] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from AllenPitt
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Won't Sunnydale be somewhat going straight to hell with no slayer around? Not to mention the mayor is getting closer to his Ascension. (sometime in May or June?) Even with a super quick trial it's got to be no more than a few months away.
The Mayor is definitely doing well out of all this. Sure Giles, Willow, Oz can do research & stuff, but... no Anya to help them out on what an ascension is (she was found by Xander)... Wesley will be useless...things look bad for Our Heros.
The whole "fingerprints say Buffy Summers, but that's not anything like how this guy looked" should be fun.
Comments from author:
Things are definitely going to get tight.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from CPTSkip
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Excellent update. I thought you captured Brass perfectly.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from war
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talk about some bad luck.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from grd
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I really hope they can sneak past this and the investigators into confusion when they try to piece things together. No way could fugitive Buffy look like an oriental man despite what prints say. Machine must be faulty and someone screwed up the database! I can hear it now. Perhaps Willow can aid the confusion with some computer magic.
Comments from author:
The fingerprints will definitely leave the science minded a bit lost.
Review By [grd] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gettng to Know You" from TwoBlackDragons
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Thanks for the update. Terrific story so far.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If it weren't for . . . . ." from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil author\muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If it weren't for . . . . ." from CPTSkip
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Excellent last line. I am so glad to see you continue this interesting story. I can't wait to see why the desk clerk thinks two "Japanese gentlemen" have something to do with this murder.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If it weren't for . . . . ." from Greywizard
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I hate you! (And cliffhangers!) ;-)

It would appear that someone (or something) has been killed either in their room or adjacent to it, and considering the way Murphy works, I'd say it wasn't outside the possibilities that Faith took out some demon or hybrid demon inside the hotel and was seen by someone who alerted the authorities.

Of course, this would/could only occur while Buffy and Xander were away from the hotel, too. ;-)

Still wondering how Gerard is going to track them to Vegas, because that is exactly the kind of complication B&X need to contend with, now. ;-)

Looking forward to seeing who/what else is going to be showing up while they're on 'vacation.' ;-)
Comments from author:
Sorry, it just seemed to be the perfect place to end the chapter.

The next chapter will definitely be fun filled (for the reader if not Buffy and Xander). After all, It's Vegas Baby.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On the Hunt" from staticice
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This is a very interesting story, looking forward to reading more of this story.
Review By [staticice] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On the Hunt" from LFW
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I do not see the clue that is going to lead our favorite US Marshals to Xander and Buffy. Hoping for more.
Review By [LFW] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On the Hunt" from AllenPitt
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There are several problems facing them here. Not least of which is, they have a time limit --Graduation Day. If Buffy isn't back before then, the Mayor's Ascension isn't going to be stopped. (he's a smart guy-knows he didn't need to beat the council & slayer(s)--just delay to that day. As is, things are going very well for him, ie no interference with getting that box of spiders...probably has 1 of the vamps working for him kill off the prof of archaeology, etc.
I realize this is Xander-centered, but why isn't Angel joining them in their search for Faith? He'd be quite helpful. He's even been to Las Vegas before (back in the 50s) ---
Anyway--Buffy is screwed on the conviction, I don't see any way to prove her innocence short of a confession by Faith, and I doubt that'd be accepted absent convincing evidence--judges are quite reluctant to overturn convictions based solely on somebody saying they did it instead...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run, Buffy, Run." from CarterOfMars
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You're clearly a talented writer but I don't see Buffy caring about Faith as you suggest in this tale, if she had, she'd have done something in canon pre Faith going off the rails.

But hey, you do write well.
Review By [CarterOfMars] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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