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Review of chapter "Getting To Know Me" from banner
Review:
Interesting concepts. I think I WILL look up the Dresden Files...
Review By [banner] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting To Know Me" from desartartt
Review:
I will greatly enjoy this story.
Review By [desartartt] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting To Know Me" from Greywizard
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This is definitely a new and different Xander, and I'm certainly interested in learning some more about the back history he hasn't mentioned yet.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting To Know Me" from crashandburn
Review:
Very cool, like the person said before me. There were a few issues with missing words, a quick beta run through would help a lot. But I love what you started here. In so much I actually registered so I could review it. ^_~ Good luck, I hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Try reading it out loud. Even the narrative parts are colloquill. I'll add to the beginniing that Harry's from Chicago... Andthank you for reviewing!
Review By [crashandburn] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting To Know Me" from LordCorwin
Review:
The nits - a few "word" errors ... don't remember where, but only a few ... :)
The gits - WELL DONE! ... I like the beginning ... and as a fan of Harry Dresden .... very well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Trying reading it out loud; as I mentioned in another review, even the narrative reads as colloquill, Chicago style. COuld that account for the 'word errors' you mentioned?
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting To Know Me" from Fasor
Review:
cool
Review By [Fasor] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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