Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges
Site backup in progress - you will not be able to login or update any site content - this should complete within 10 minutes.

Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated Stories
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from sonofgloin
Review:
NOOO!!!! I dont want it to be over! It cant be over! But that being said, what a way for it to end!! I hope there will be a IF3 but we will just have to wait on the edge of our seats to find out...
You made a point of thanking the readers in your final AN but I have to say that it is WE that should be thanking you. Thankyou for giving us a story that made us feel, made us cry, made us laugh, thankyou for a story that has meaning and inspiration and that we can all look to as something that we can hope to achieve.
It all began with Ilfirin Meleth and I know there is alot more to come, and I am very glad of it. I have no fears of your coming work because I know that it will be of a standard equaling and surpassing your current work...
Thankyou again Anoron, you are a truly brilliant writer... namaarie

§- sonofgloin
Review By [sonofgloin] • Date [12 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two Steps Forward, One back..." from sonofgloin
Review:
Well, what can I say? There is one chapter to go and I am not looking forwar to reading it, because after that, it will be the end of one of the most awsome fics I have ever read. The chapter was perfection. Heartbreaking angst, burning andger and refreshing comedy. I am not really a Legolas fan but the way you write him brings him to life for me. Dawn was supurb, it was all supurb, well done once again, mellon

§- sonofgloin
Review By [sonofgloin] • Date [12 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Okay, I've now read through chapter 17 and I'm glad to say that I'm feeling much better about this story. I've reread large chunks of the story and Dawn's continuing depression makes a bit more sense. Also, the second time I read through Spike's isolation from the rest of the gang was more marked to me. I have no idea why; maybe simply because I was looking for it. I do have one question: why is Arwen still alive? Did I miss the part in IM2 where she failed to give up her immortal life to remain with Aragorn? I know the movie (Two Towers) seemed to indicate that she would continue to be immortal, but that was misleading and definitely non-canonical.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Okay, I've just read chapter 13, and right now, I'm inclined to agree wholeheartedly with Calendar's review above. This Dawn seems very OOC; she doesn't even seem like the same Dawn of Ilfirin Meleth I. I know I said before that I thought her bitter response upon losing her child was apt, and I still do, but what's she done here is just beyonds the bounds. It is CRUEL beyond measure to make her sister and her friends think she has killed herself. I agree with whoever said that if she had explained the situation, she would have been back with Legolas faster. I'm especially mad at Spike right now for just buying into Dawn's pain and warped need for revenge on the Scoobies. If Dawn gets excused somewhat because of the trauma of her miscarriage, Spike has NO excuse for his behavior. The fake suicide (and for some reason, especially the suicide note and repeated track) have made me lose all respect for Dawn and Spike. I'm really hoping you can redeem them (well, I guess just Dawn) in the chapters left, but I'm not sure how you'd accomplish that.

All that being said, I really love the first story, and I'm just going to have faith in your skill and that you know what you're doing.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg, that was beutiful, is this story finished, if not plz hurry and update, oh my freaking god, you are talented, that was soooo oh i cant even find the words *wipes tear*, god bless you.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I read everything I could in the shortest amount of time possible andI am serious, you must update. Now that Dawn's nearly back to normal, the fic must go on! Your fic rox!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Oh, and another thing, a factual error - if this fic would take place one century after the events of part one, then king Elessar would still be alive in the beginning of the fic, as he died in the year 119 Fourth Age, 1541 by Shire timeline, yet the Ringbearers left Middle Earth in 3021, the final year of Third Age, which is 1421 by Shire timeline. That'd mean that Aragorn still had 20 years to live at the beginning of the fic and would have died sometimes during Dawn's forced stay in Sunnydale.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [25 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
now, while generally, writers of Dawn/male fic will be shot by me and without any mercy whatsoever, I actually liked this fic. Heck, you even managed to show the "good" Spike as a decent character, instead of the impotent asshole he is mostly.

And, well... overall, it was interesting. Still, consider it a great achievement, making me like a Dawn/male story :-p carry on with the writing!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [25 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Hey! I LOVE this story! I just found the first one in the series and have already finished the second! PLLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEE update. Thank you for writting ~Ursa
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [10 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Love the story! The latest is great! Can't wait to see the fall out when Spike tells Dawn's story to Buffy and crew. Eagerly awaiting next update!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
WOW... I am without words. That was amazing. I loved that chapter so much. The range and juxtaposition of emotion and the ability to meld it all together was truely a work of Anoron. I loved every piece, the angst, the love, the anger... And I cant wait for more. I cant pick my favourite part because it was all so good. I am glad the scoobies know about Dawn and I am glad that Dawn and Legolas are all kinda happy again.. I am worried about that comment at the end though, I hope the things to come are good. Brilliant job Anoron

§- sonofgloin
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [26 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Dear God.

What's wrong with Dawn?

Legolas and Dawn both believe that each other does not love the other... oh the irony.

What's wrong with Dawn?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Awwwww!!! *turns pleading look on you*

Stop that! You're making them all sad and stuff! Which in turn makes me sad; and this is not a good thing! I have to live you know; i cannot be moping my way through the final stretch of my senior year! I just can't!!!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [22 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
start back Page: 3 of 8 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated Stories