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Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I actually have a couple of things to add. Dawn has been gone from Sunnydale for over 100 years. She had lived for most of those in absolute bliss. She loved legolas more than anyone or anything she could imagine. How would she not hate them for ripping her away from that. 100 years do you get that? 100 years. She has a right to hate them, family or not.
She has lost it all in a mater of hours; her husband; her baby; her home; her immortality! (I can only assume). I think she is allowed to be a little rash. As far as I can see Dawn is the same Dawn she always was. I cant see how the character development is any different. Anoron is a more then capeable writer who isn't just going to leave the story hanging without explanation of Dawn's feelings or some kind of resolution to them. Personally, as I have said I love the chapter

§- sonofgloin
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I really loved this chapter. I had never, like Dawn, realised the similarites between Spike and Legolas. When she looked up at the vampire and I read her reaction I felt really sad for her. You are capturing her character so well and with every paragraph the ideas of the strength of Legolas and Dawn's love grows deeper. I cant wait to see what happens. I hope she kicks some scoobie backside. Except Tara, I like Tara. Well done Anoron.

§- sonofgloin
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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You mentioned angst, but I had no idea... Wail!!!! That was just awful. Poor Dawn, I can't imagine what she's going through. Nice parallels to Season Six on BtVS, and I hope Dawn can find some peace, or at least a way home. Looking forward, apprehensively, to more.

houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Uh, was loving the story up 'til this point... Shouldn't she ask to be sent back? Her staying quiet and sulking seems wrong, especially when the witches might be able to send her back in an hour if she just asked... Also, her instant hate of the Scooby's seems -way- over the top, no way they could know what's been going on and for her to out and out hate them...? Just doesn't mesh with how you've developed Dawn in the 1st story. Now if she miscarried as soon as she got there and threw a fit as she bled, -then- you have something to angst about. But as it is, Dawn was on the opposite side of the fence when Buffy was brought back, don't think she'd forget what it's like. Sorry
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Keep up the good work and write more soon!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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*speachlessness* WOW.. That was so well written. My jaw dropped more and more as I read. Aw, I feel so sad now that Dawn is gone, but I think we will catch up with her again pretty soon. Please keep it comming Anoron. Your stories are so cool.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh my. You weren't kidding about splitting them up. Ouch, and what a painful way to go. Just when they were so happy and settled into their new life! Waiting on pins and needles to hear where this goes...

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Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Ok I meant to say pulled out of middle earth and brought back to Sunnydale. *My fingers were moving faster than my brain was this morning. lol *

Michele
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh lord I bet I'm right. She is being pulled from middle earth and being brought back to middle earth. At leat that is the only explanation that I can comeup with as to where she is going. Crossing fngers for an update real real real soon. Until then.

HAsta LA Bye Byez,

Michele
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Sorry I forgot to review this when i read it. I checked to see what other people thought and went oops I forgot so here I is. I loved the first one and the Sequel is shapin up to just as if not better than the first.

Hasta La Bye Byez,

Michele
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Wow, this is only the first chapter and I am hoked alwready. It made me laugh in so many places. It is so sweet that they are now intertwined in each others past lives. It is a really good start to which I am sure will be a really good sequal. Cant wait for the next chapters. You rock Anoron.

§- sonofgloin
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [26 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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Oh, how exciting! A sequel! Interesting setup, with all but Gimli having passed away, and I look forward to how the remaining characters will interact, as well as seeing what's up with Dawn's dreams- omens or fears....

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Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [26 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Ilfirin Meleth II- The Test of Ties" from Anonymous Reviewer
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YESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You rule!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the sequel!!! Love it already
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [25 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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