Please come back to this story..............................................................PLEASE!!!!!

Another interesting story. I like the idea of Illyria/Rogue, and the relationship and their characters were nicely created and worked. I also liked Courtney and Elle - their insanity made them hilarious, and intriguing characters. i wish there had been a but more development of the later characters; i felt that as the story progressed, it lost some of its' focus, what with Peter, Skotti and Kate. The last chapter especially, with the love triangle and the two completely new and 'unknown' characters. Still it was very interesting, and I'm interested in the sequel you mentioned. Is it written, or at least planned out? I'd like to see more of the newer characters, and find out what the Scoobies plan to do, and whether Emma has plans for Rogue. Also to see where Illyria's plans will lead to. Until the next chapter/message/story, I remain your moderately faithful reviewer, Meneldur

Everything was planned out but since this was a fic-a-thon fic, I found that semi-convenient ending spot and ended it early. There are actually chapter outlines for not only the rest of the fic but stuff in the middle of the story too, which would decompress some of the rush at the end. But again, sacrificed to meet the deadline.

You know, I've never felt that this was a finished story, it needs a sequil. Please write one some day. Well, thanks for writing what you have of it, bye for now.

re read it still as good as I remembered.

Thanks :)

Well hell, I didn't get update notices about the last three chapters...that happens a lot from TTH for some reason.

Anywho, love the updates JHH...Keep 'em coming.

More 'ship stuff would be grand....hope this story goes on for many more chapters.

It will, some day.

I am already looking forward to read the next story in the arc. I wonder if the Men in Black will manage to sneak themselves into your story (one got to love those coffee drinking little aliens in the Men in Black movies) somehow?

::Feeds the plot bunny and gives the muse a huge jar of encouragement cookies::

Once you go Worm, that's what you'll yearn!

This is such an interesting fic. I do enjoy Illyria's strategy on taking over the world and her grooming Rogue as her right hand woman is an interesting use of her talents.

Beats trying to slam herself into the modern world like a sledgehammer.

*puts her head to the side like a curious puppy* Uh? *HUGS*

O_o

Hope Peter remembers to put the seat down! Good chapter really like how you did Peter's thoughts as he watched the two girl playing oneupmanship. Looking forward to the sequel!


Wispr

Yeah. He might be in for a long, sad life if he doesn't. ^_^

As much as I love the story, did something get accidentally dropped? The stuff about Stark sorta came out of nowhere. Oh well, maybe it will be in the next arc. Like I said love it so far, and am looking forward to the further adventures of SHART.

It's mentioned that they're looking for a home previously. Stark donates the space and some funding for SHART but both sides view the other as necessary: SHART needs the space and money, Tony needs something unspecified from them that has Cleopatra afraid of pissing them off.

Great fic. I look forward to reading more. You really are an awesome writer. :D

Whoot. Thanks. :)

+20 points for use of the word "slanguage."

I'm glad Gwen is getting a bigger part. Gwen > MJ, and Bryce Dallas Howard >>> Kirsten Dunst.

Oh hell yeah.

There I was thinking; Yay MJs gone I won't have to suffer my least favorite line in Marvel history, and what happens, you have Gwen say it. I know its tradition and all but I cringe every time I read or hear that line.
Anyway besides that another great update.

I had to do it man. Sorry. ^_^

Okay, this was a darn nifty chapter. Interesting character stuff in this one; good work.

--Peter nodded, keeping his eyes on Gwen. "I go to school with her. Political science major. Not the brightest bulb in the chandelier, but she's smart enough. Then again, we're looking for a team that can take down violent mutants, not beat them on Jeopardy."
That was true, even if it was a bit mean.--

Ouch! No KIDDING it's a bit mean!
Gee, and here I thought Peter saved the nasty barbs for when he's fighting a bad guy.

"Courtney, I can't help it if Peter finds Gwen attractive. I'm his new boss, not god." Courtney's eyes lit up and Marie realized she should have chosen her words better. "No, that doesn’t mean you can ask Illyria."

Heh.
So basically, if Illyria sends Rogue or one of the others on an errand, and someone asks what they're doing, they can honestly say "I'm on a mission from God."
^_^

I'm glad to see Peter actually noticing that incredibly sexy costume of Gwen's.
::Drools::
I'd be careful if I were her, though. It would be SO easy for Jealous!Courtney to create a bit of poison-ivy itchy oil inside that outfit... or a little Radium dust, if she were feeling *really* pissed.

Gwen's codename (Banshee)--Um, isn't an angry Irishman going to show up and sue her for copyright infringement? Siren is the cooler name, but again, taken.
Which... I guess is the problem. By now, ALL the cool names are taken.
Oh well.

So basically, this chapter is all about the Gwen.
Sexy, spider-seducing Gwen, heh heh heh.
(Um, how does the guy walk around all these hot women in his skintight outfit and not suffer a bit of embarassment? He must have zen-master control over certain bodily... reactions.)
o_O

Well, Siryn exists in the X-Men movies as a kid younger than even the New X-Men (Bobby, Piotr, Kitty, Rogue) and so her codename isn't really in use, and Banshee never appeared to the best of my knowledge, so it's free in this universe.

Good. Mary Jane was a bitch. Hope you're not giving Courtney the shaft though; I kinda like her in a weird sorta way.

Not necessarily; we're opening up a new plot arc soon that has three possible endings and so I need to line up the pieces so all three would be viable.