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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Jess
Review:
God MJ is a bitch... I always thought so really. *HUGS*
Comments from author:
Yeah, not a fan of hers.
Review By [Jess] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
One of the things that always drove me nuts about Spider-man was that the guy never caught a break, and had more emotional agony from his personal life than physical agony from getting the crap beat out of him constantly. I know that one of the reasons that he has persisted and been so popular is that his life didn't suddenly become perfect just because he had super powers, but I hope that you aren't planning on tormenting him in this story as much as his is in the comics and movies.

At any rate, another excellent update. Thanks.
Comments from author:
No, this is really an upgrade. He's trading MJ for potential relationships with Courtney, Gwen, and a character yet to appear...
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from MusingsOfApathy
Review:
I'm sure in MJ's mind, that was supposed to be a devastating little piece of news for Peter. Oh well, I guess she can't have everything she wants. It would be funny if Peter had to go to a function with all the girls and bumped into MJ and Harry, with Peter not looking the worse for wear.

Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)
Comments from author:
Bwa ha ha...
Review By [MusingsOfApathy] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Good chapter... poor Peter... guy just can't win can he?

Wispr
Comments from author:
Dude, he has a chick who crawls into bed with him for fun. That's made of win.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Locathah
Review:
Why do I get the feeling you're not a big MJ fan...?
Comments from author:
Because up until recently, Gwen Stacy has always been defined as Peter's "one true love" (and certain writers refused to work on the recent book that redefined that), so I don't like how they handled Gwen and MJ in the movies. And I hate Dunst.
Review By [Locathah] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Idmonscat
Review:
I'm getting a feeling that Peter is going to get smacked around more by the women in his life than he is by the villains.
Comments from author:
Like Whitney and Bobby... ^_^
Review By [Idmonscat] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Jess
Review:
The last two chapters were wonderful Joe. *HUGS*
Comments from author:
Word. ^_^
Review By [Jess] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from EbonySilvers
Review:
Go Peter! Chicks at last.
Comments from author:
Took him long enough. ^_^
Review By [EbonySilvers] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from mymatedave
Review:
Liking this, but Elle's character does seem a little off, with everything happening too... casually I guess. Seems kinda handwavey, but stiill good fun.
Comments from author:
Thankies. ^_^
Review By [mymatedave] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Yea! More updates! I liked this one, what with MJ and Gwen meeting and seeing Courtney pounce on Petey [cue ominous music: da da duh!] (ok, not in that order, but you know...).
Comments from author:
RUN PETER RUN!
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Grindhall
Review:
So Faith Lehane arrives at the party to check up on Illyria and meets Eliza Dushku who plays her in Winifred Burkle's TV show Faith the Vampire Slayer? But Winifred Burkle is really Illyria? My brain hurts.

Great update.

Thanks for Sharing.
Comments from author:
Yes, Winifred and Illyria are one in the same... Illyria uses the Winifred persona for places she can't go easily as a demon, like Hollywood meetings. And yes, Eliza, Alyson, and Amber play the TV versions of Faith, Willow, and Tara respectively. :)
Review By [Grindhall] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Dude, I hope this story is a long one...because even though the chaps are relatively short, I like the steady progression....and I also hope to see some Rogue/Illyria goodness like only you can write.

Really enjoying this one!
Comments from author:
I've got something like 30 outlined. The main arc will end with 20 or so, then there's a Black Suit arc, and another arc of odds 'n ends.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Idmonscat
Review:
Yay Marie and Illyria snuggles, more please, pretty please.
Comments from author:
More's up.
Review By [Idmonscat] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Past Donor)DreamSmith
Review:
Actually, I'm feeling bad for poor Elle.
Here she is, in what's supposed to be a safe place, surrounded by people who can understand the strangeness of the whole 'superpowers' thing... and everybody is making fun of her pretty relentlessly.
I know it's all supposed to be fun and not-so-serious, and all of that, but I know from experience how that kind of 'harmless fun' feels when you're on the receiving end of it.
Can Elle please find someone who's on her side? Someone who can see past the crazy, and appreciate the awesome cuteness? (or cute awesomeness; either way. ^_^)
Comments from author:
Elle and Skotti eventually work things out, but you've gotta look at Elle... she just up and throws herself at Peter because he's a "toy" to her and I've repeated that tendency of hers with Marie and now Skotti. No sane person would react well to that and it'll take a long, drawn out talk between Elle and Skotti for Skotti to relax and start feeling comfortable around Elle. That's scheduled, though.
Review By [(Past Donor)DreamSmith] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
This was a nice domestic interlude. It does leave me wondering which room Elle stalked off towards. :D

Thanks for working through the disappointment to provide us with more to read.
Comments from author:
Family room. Video games are her cathartic activity of choice. :)
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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