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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from peterv
Review:
I don't have much constructive too add. I just wanted to say I am enjoying this story very much. One point - won't any of the X-men come looking for Marie?

Peter
Comments from author:
This is post X-3, obviously, meaning that unless I want to run Super!Logan with his uncanny ability to track people over miles and miles no matter what they do (including flying, in Marie's case now), they lack a competent psi to run Cerebro and therefore can't locate her. They'll recur though.
Review By [peterv] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from mymatedave
Review:
I like the new chapter, especially the melding of the universes with the Hellfire Club and The Company being the same organisation. Happy Christmas
Comments from author:
Thanks. You too. :)
Review By [mymatedave] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Bloody nice... really liking the character development going on here!

Wispr
Comments from author:
I kinda like the irony of the Mutara generator being the reason Illyria's even more powerful than ever.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Arekanderu
Review:
Nice one. Can't wait to see Rogue grow even stronger
Comments from author:
Oh, wait till you see what she does with her powers next chapter...
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Infinix
Review:
Definitely one of my favorite of your recent stories it's both funny and has plenty of opportunities for action but really that last line was a piece of art. I read it, had to reread it once and then just broke down laughing.
Comments from author:
Action: It's coming.

Courtney: Will recur. ^_^
Review By [Infinix] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Jess
Review:
Its like living in a mad house but its hot chicks. So weird but I love it so much! *HUGS*
Comments from author:
This is MY HOUSE! MY HOUSE!

...stupid soup commercials. ^_^
Review By [Jess] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Nice... I like seeing how Marie is already starting to change in her outlook on how she sees other mutants. Can't wait for more!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Warped. I am it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Nice story. I didn't know what to expect, but it has turned out to be quite interesting. I'm not really familiar with any of the characters -- I stopped watching AtS after being disillusioned by S4, and just can't seem to get into Heroes -- so I can't comment about how in or out of character they might be, but I've enjoyed reading about them in your story.
Comments from author:
Elle's easy for me; I'm a psychiatric patient and so I think "What would I do... if I was a hot girl who looked like Veronica Mars?" and write it. Illyria... I've had a few complaints from people who don't seem to think she'd ever either adapt to human life or try to take over the world again, albeit by something a bit more subtle than "Grah! I kill you all now!"
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
This is a very interesting story... can't wait to see where you go with it!

Wispr
Comments from author:
To boldly go where no man has gone before... in Rogue's pants! jk
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Noclaf
Review:
Ellie form Heroes? Oh gods you rock! And Taking over the world via "Faith the Vampire Slayer"? Buffy has got to be a little peeved that she isn't the star.
Comments from author:
Life's a bitch and so is Illyria.
Review By [Noclaf] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Valkyrie
Review:
Your stuff is so bizarre. Not that I mind, mind you. Whatever else it is, your stuff is interesting as well.
Comments from author:
*takes a bow*
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Ignotus
Review:
Elle (somewhat tame psychopath), Marie (can't touch people without killing them), and Illyria (the power hungry, egomaniacal, godking of the primordium)...? All three together...? In a relationship...? Oh dear, that seems like a recipe for disaster... and a whole lot a fun. I wonder what the morning will bring? :D
Comments from author:
ROGUEZILLA!
Review By [Ignotus] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Arekanderu
Review:
Nice touch with Elle. Are you going to bring Sylar in as well? If he sumbmits to Illyria power in exchange for some tasty mutants he would make a perfect minion
Comments from author:
No, in this I've integrated the Hellfire Club and the Company. This takes place as an AU to Heroes, because Elle is older here than she is in the series, but was still in the company's possession until Illyria took her away.
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)DreamSmith
Review:
Hey, *I* want a fairly harmless psychopath of my own!
^_^

Really nice work, sir.
Elle is adorable. I love the idea of her and Rogue being in a relationship.
Marie should certainly be able to 'balance' her, though if I were her I'd find/absorb someone with a defensive power ASAP, so as to survive the first tantrum Elle throws without Illyria around to stop her.

Oh, and 'Faith: the Vampire Slayer' (the series)
::Cackles madly::

If I were in that 'verse, I'd be a staff writer on that show!
Or....
::Sigh::
Nah, who am I kidding? I'd just be sitting at home and writing fanfic about it, like I am now.
o_O
Comments from author:
I dunno... Rogue might get to like being zapped. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)DreamSmith] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Ooh, good choice having Illyria care about Marie's sanity :)
Comments from author:
Someone's gotta be sane...
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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