Definitely one of my favorite of your recent stories it's both funny and has plenty of opportunities for action but really that last line was a piece of art. I read it, had to reread it once and then just broke down laughing.
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Action: It's coming.
Courtney: Will recur. ^_^
Review By [Infinix] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Nice story. I didn't know what to expect, but it has turned out to be quite interesting. I'm not really familiar with any of the characters -- I stopped watching AtS after being disillusioned by S4, and just can't seem to get into Heroes -- so I can't comment about how in or out of character they might be, but I've enjoyed reading about them in your story.
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Elle's easy for me; I'm a psychiatric patient and so I think "What would I do... if I was a hot girl who looked like Veronica Mars?" and write it. Illyria... I've had a few complaints from people who don't seem to think she'd ever either adapt to human life or try to take over the world again, albeit by something a bit more subtle than "Grah! I kill you all now!"
Ellie form Heroes? Oh gods you rock! And Taking over the world via "Faith the Vampire Slayer"? Buffy has got to be a little peeved that she isn't the star.
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Life's a bitch and so is Illyria.
Review By [Noclaf] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Elle (somewhat tame psychopath), Marie (can't touch people without killing them), and Illyria (the power hungry, egomaniacal, godking of the primordium)...? All three together...? In a relationship...? Oh dear, that seems like a recipe for disaster... and a whole lot a fun. I wonder what the morning will bring? :D
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ROGUEZILLA!
Review By [Ignotus] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Nice touch with Elle. Are you going to bring Sylar in as well? If he sumbmits to Illyria power in exchange for some tasty mutants he would make a perfect minion
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No, in this I've integrated the Hellfire Club and the Company. This takes place as an AU to Heroes, because Elle is older here than she is in the series, but was still in the company's possession until Illyria took her away.
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Hey, *I* want a fairly harmless psychopath of my own! ^_^
Really nice work, sir. Elle is adorable. I love the idea of her and Rogue being in a relationship. Marie should certainly be able to 'balance' her, though if I were her I'd find/absorb someone with a defensive power ASAP, so as to survive the first tantrum Elle throws without Illyria around to stop her.
Oh, and 'Faith: the Vampire Slayer' (the series) ::Cackles madly::
If I were in that 'verse, I'd be a staff writer on that show! Or.... ::Sigh:: Nah, who am I kidding? I'd just be sitting at home and writing fanfic about it, like I am now. o_O
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I dunno... Rogue might get to like being zapped. :)
Review By [DreamSmith] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
"...demons can do almost anything humans do for money. Vampires are, of course, limited by the sun, and some demons are limited by their looks. I suppose I was fortunate to be incarnated in such a form in a world that humans now rule."
Now I know where telemarketers come from. I can just see a call center full of plogaras.
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Nah, vampires. They just hide out inside all day and harass you.