Interesting start. And not bad. But really, why should Buffy even consider what Jenny is asking.

--But really, why should Buffy even consider what Jenny is asking.--

Because Giles, her father-figure asked her to?
Or perhaps because of guilt. She thinks to herself in chapter two that Jenny's death can be traced pretty directly back to Buffy herself. That it was Buffy who freed Angelus, Buffy who failed to kill him when given the chance, and therefore Buffy who's carrying around a ton of baggage about the whole thing.
So that's a reason.
Now, the question is, will she really just take all this at face value?

This is a very well written start to the story. Nice cliffhanger.

You did a very good job describing the action of the fight. A lot of fight sequences tend to become too convoluted to keep track of where everyone is, and who is doing what, making me dislike them on principle, but yours was well written and easy to follow, and I enjoyed it.

Faith showing up to save the day wasn't exactly a surprise to me, seeing as that was pretty much in the summary, but it was handled well. I'm a little bit surprised that she didn't seem to have any 'tude, no matter what she is up to.

Keep up the good work. I hope there's more soon.

Thanks!

Action is easy, I find. Drama, now; *that's* difficult.

And... you'll be sort of amazed at how soon there will be more.
^_^