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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
Oh... wow. This is fun!
I can't wait to see Snape try to bully THIS kid. The only downside so far is that Pettigrew would have seen what Harry showed Ron, and might try to use the information.
Review By [banner] • Date [27 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from daveykins
Review:
Utterly crazy... utterly inspired!

More - more!
Review By [daveykins] • Date [16 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
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:)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
Too cool.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slightlyeccentric
Review:
I've never seen a Harry from Discworld story, but I like the way you've put this together, though the suggested incestuous crush Ginny has on Ron is kinda squicky. I like the way you've used a Pratchett-like voice in this, not many authors can pull that off. If you try to space out the side notes evenly it will be even better. I hope to see you update soon.
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EchoElizabeth
Review:
Fun! The footnotes came on a little too thick in the first section, but other than that it was a very good start. I'm definitely interested in seeing where you take this - it has lots of potential. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [EchoElizabeth] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ouatic
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So far... totally brill!
Review By [Ouatic] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Interesting idea, and entertainingly Pratchett-esque.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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What? Was he raised by *all* of Discworld?

...

COOL! :D


Hogfather reference? Neato. Did you see the tv special? It had it's moments, but it could've been better :)

What was the unidentifiable pinkish-peach kind?

octarine is fun :)

Nice reconstruction of dialogue. Definitely a unique intro for Hermoine. Thanks for thinking of this stuff :)
Comments from author:
I don't want to give too much away, but Harry spent a lot of time in different places.

The jelly bean shall eventually be revealed, cause I'm evil.

Heheh. You catch on quick.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwilightUnicorn
Review:
An interesting beginning. I'll be keeping an eye on this one. -TU
Review By [TwilightUnicorn] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mokahi
Review:
Ooh, I'm hooked. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orion
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I've always disliked it when fan fic authors feel the need to footnote things . . . if it absolutely needs explanation there's a way to do it in story, and if it only maybe does then maybe find a way to say the same thing that doesn't.

That said - these were not that sort of foot note. I've only read a couple disc world fics, but I greatly enjoyed this fic so far, and I felt that the foot notes, used the way they were, where they were, really made it feel like a Disc story, rather than a couple Disc things thrown into a Potter story.

VERY good job.
Review By [Orion] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JEHayes
Review:
Just to get this out of the way: Ron/Ginny is a disgusting ship and while seeing it implied as a possibility was indeed hilarious, it was also slightly nauseating. Especially the fact that Mr. and Mrs. Weasely seemed prepared to accept it. What the hell. R/G sounds almost as bad as canon Harry/Ginny!

I've never read discworld though I've heard good things. The chapter was enjoyable regardless. I love Harry's who aren't incompetent wastes of space, and this Harry looks to fit the bill. There were several points that made me burst out laughing. Though I don't know why, the "15 minutes later..." was one of them. Bean roulette is a great idea, and I would definitely play it if Bertie Bott's Everyflavor beans actually existed. (sigh) Out of curiosity, what was the flavor of the bean Ron couldn't figure out? Or is it just a mystery?

Lastly, do you ever plan to finish or even make substantial, maybe even semi-substantial, progress on a story you start? I ask because I really enjoy your writing and I think the ideas behind your stories are fun, interesting and unique. However, there seems to be no follow through at all, and while that does sadden me, it's borderline maddening not knowing whether or not I can expect more than one or two chapters for any given story from you? I'd like to stress that I'm not trying to say I'm entitled to you writing anything in particular. You write what you want and I'll enjoy it. I'd just appreciate knowing whether you plan on finish or even just writing more for stories you start.
Comments from author:
Expect the R/G levels to rise. Cause I'm that evil and I agree H/G is just as bad.

The bean will be explained at some point. Once again, cause I'm evil.

I get far too many ideas and I hate typing. I have tons written up, but typing.... Blech. Check fanfiction net for some of my near to finished works.
Review By [JEHayes] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Starbright
Review:
Yay, Discworld! This was just so, so funny. With the Rat and the Luggage and NANNY! Good lord, the thought of her (?) raising Harry boggles my mind.

And this part?

***** Harry bit into a grayish-blue jellybean with a thoughtful look. “Field mouse(7).”

***** (7) It never occurred to Ron to question how Harry knew what a field mouse tasted like.
***** It would however, bug him later.

Best thing ever.

And I agree with you about the footnotes; it's much easier on the reader to have them just below the paragraph. I'm really looking forward to more of this.
Review By [Starbright] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
This is gonna be so cool!

See ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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