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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from axolotl
Review:
I'm liking this approach so far, if something gets confusing I'll critique nicely but for now good work ^_^
Review By [axolotl] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Twoboots
Review:
This I like! It's a new twist on an old idea and extremely well written. Give us more of your wonderful work!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AllenPitt
Review:
Lots of names got dropped -- "Giles" for one Also the hellmouth reference might lead to Sunnydale (Daniel is good at digging up myths) which could lead to them... plus Jack almost recognized something about Buffy's voice, so he might remember Joyce--
Weird to see a Buffy who doesn't care about Dawn all that much --other than as part of the typical save the world mission--
All the SGC needs to do now is see the Knights of B & think they're Jaffa.... (forehead tattoos) ... come to think of it, maybe there is a connection. it'd be funny if Glory's home could be reached through a stargate....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from GypsyDruid
Review:
hmm... getting interesting.

can't wait for more.
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Ironfelix
Review:
The chapter started out OK, But it was just a rehash of chapter 1 almost. It takes away from the story I think. Otherwise it's a good plot.
Review By [Ironfelix] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from martelcris
Review:
well done!
I like SG/Btvs xover and this seem a VERY GOOD one!

Bye
Review By [martelcris] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Shezzi
Review:
oh, I really like this idea, can't wait to see where you take it! please update soon! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from arkeus
Review:
hey nice. it has the usual over emotional tone, but i can hope it will be toned down :p
Review By [arkeus] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from axolotl
Review:
this is really interesting, it'd be very cool to see where it goes ^_^ good work so far!
Review By [axolotl] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Thedruid
Review:
Huh? Why is this story under quartine?
Comments from author:
I forgot a disclaimer!

Fixed now and hopefully it'll be released soon!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Recent Donor)BuffyCharmed
Review:
Sounds awesome so far. Can't wait for you to continue!
Review By [(Recent Donor)BuffyCharmed] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from spk
Review:
I just love "Buffy's real family" stories and this one is off to an amazing start. I can't wait to see where you take this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Marcel
Review:
This was, indeed, a very original idea; I don't recall reading anything similar. I'm really looking forward to see how you handle it.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from SlowMercury
Review:
I like this beginning very much... I hope to see more of it. You did have a couple of typos, including "died" for "dyed." I'm looking forward to the reactions of the SGC as they will probably freak out in a (possibly) controlled manner while simultaneously tearing the country apart looking for Dawn. It does seem to me that this is going to have to be a much shorter confrontation with Glory because there's no way the Scoobies are going to be able to hide Dawn, especially because she's going to be fighting tooth and nail to contact her family. And Glory et co. already know who the Key is.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Thedruid
Review:
Now that was a good dramatic beginning. Really wetted my apptite for what is going to happen now.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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