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Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Ghostrider
Review:
*Giggles insanely*

Ahh, so much hilarity-in-waiting! Or is that hilarity-in-the-making?

And why is everybody just walking around town? No cars? Or are cars driven by Doom doomed to destruction? I can't rightfully remember. Now we have Cordelia joining up with His Royal Highness and Silver Sable.... as a BATF agent? I wonder where she got the ID (looking at you, Xander). Looks like Sable is Doom's Cordy, going on the way they banter. Faith may be like Doom's Jessica, hm?

As for Xander's mom, her suit is more revealing than Natasha's? What, it's a string bikini? Because, honestly, Miss Romanov's outfit makes catsuits jealous.

More when you can, please. The hilarity is contagious and you don't often see that with Doom.

BTW, I always hear Doom speaking with James Earl Jones' voice. I wonder why that is...
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
Hey! A new chapter! Cool!

Now, will we see more before 2012? Here too Hope!
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Omegaprime
Review:
Interesting chapter.

Wonder how the gang will react to who is Xander's real father.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from (Recent Donor)zima
Review:
Cool fic with Doom as Xanders father. Looking forward to the next chapter
Review By [(Recent Donor)zima] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Bluesnowman
Review:
interesting
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from SledgeHammer
Review:
Doom's in a tizzy because his son (Xander) gave him a nutshell dump of his life up to that point, and we also get some backstory on Doom's own encounters with Hellmouths (including one in Latveria itself). To put it bluntly, Doom hates Hellmouths more than he hates Reed Richards - and has far greater cause. Victor von Doom merely wants to be respected and left alone. It would take a rather odd turn of circumstances for Reed Richards to grasp that (and he went to college with the guy). I mentioned in an earlier review that nothing about Doom is *typical Big Bad* any more than is true of Magneto. However, mess with his family, and he becomes as protective as either Reed OR Sue Richards - VERY protective. (Doom's comments to Xander in the previous chapter about Janna Kalderdash could easily have come from the Latverian dictator speaking about *any* Latverian who died outside the country. It's also why there is currently an *alliance* between Reed and Doom - that's right; Marvel's Longest Running Frenemy Feud is currently in abeyance.)
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [8 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm Doomed" from SledgeHammer
Review:
What a lot of reviewers seem to be forgetting is that Victor von Doom is no more your typical Big Bad than Magneto (Eric Lensherr). In fact, in *any* of their many confrontations, did Doom *or* any member of the Fantastic Four try directly to kill anyone on the other side? Even Ben Grimm hasn't wanted Victor dead, though he *has* spoken quite openly to Victor's face about pummeling him into next year. In fact, Victor von Doom has something in common with the Master of Magnetism (and with Reed Richards, for that matter) - you don't mess with their family (which is why Quentin Travers has a rather large price on his noggin). Victor is also quite aware he doesn't have to worry about either the Snake or the Troll, as Alexander Lavelle von Doom AKA Xander Harris AKA Xander von Doom took care of those two problems, thank you very much. So now Victor is headed west, and specifically to California. This meeting will be Decidedly Interesting.
Comments from author:
glad you seem to enjoy it.
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [8 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from Dragonelf
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I am glad that you got inspired to update this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a serving of Liptauer::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [20 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
I can't wait for the others to find out about Doom being his dad. That will be great!
Comments from author:
Yeah, that's going to be a conversation and a half.

- Tjin
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
thanks, i'll try to work on this again soon.

- Tjin
Review By [Elleria] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
I tryuely enjoy this story. Just wish it would get updated more than once every six months (on average).
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from moringstar
Review:
keep the good stuff comming.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from Chikageko
Review:
? What's got doom all in a tizzy? Angel still being alive would have sent him to LA and faith would have sent him to the hospital, not the sunnyhell motor lodge... You'd mentioned somthing about the situation with the mayor and the hellmouths but you never really clarified it in this snippit, though the background on Doom was sort of nice, I never really payed much attention to the F4 commics.
Comments from author:
One of the fundamental points that all the varied authors of the series get right is that 1. you do not betray Von Doom, and 2. you do not make Von Doom look foolish.

Wilkins did both and than left an undefended Hellmouth active in his son's hometown, something that Von Doom has already dealt with once and is ill prepared to handle again, should the Hellmouth be opening. since no one had the sense to check once a massive magic convergence was held over the portal followed by a sizable explosion he is on his way to check on that... he does have reason to be concerned.

and do you really believe that Silver Sable would spend any time whatsoever in the Motor Lodge?

Hope that explains a bit.

-Tjin
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doomed to repeat" from dreameralways
Review:
If Buffy was going through the Watcher books and knew that he had expelled all demons from his territory then wouldn't she also know at least a little about the "true" history that you created for Van Doom and that therefore he is potentially not quite as evil as he's made out to be. Kind of like Angel or Cordelia, putting up a tough front but actually does care (again, just possibly, I doubt she'd completely rule out the idea of him being evil).
Comments from author:
Buffy only knows what the TV says (Von Doom = Bad.) and what Giles has reported, Giles only knows what the watchers council has reported and the watchers council is truly scared of Von Doom. the fact that he has removed the demons means he is very powerful, it has never meant that he was nice.

So Giles is scared of Von Doom.

Latveria is a very insular country, information from within the borders doesn't really get out to the general public, the Books and Tomes and Scripts from thousands of years ago are nearly worthless and the more recent reports all paint Von Doom in a very very very not nice picture.

hope that explains a bit.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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