so Willow wasn't Ryoko? I was totally sure that you were going to make willow be Ryoko. sexy space alien captain thats also a ghost. I dont see how you could get more ryoko than that.
Great story other than that.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Ask and ye shall receive eh? Like this, especially the fact that while you gave Xander a jump because of who he was possessed by he isn't automatically all powerful.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot pie::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# "Criminals are a superstitious cowardly lot. So my disguise must be able to strike terror into their hearts! I must be a creature of the night, black, terrible... A... A... A bat! That's it. It's an omen... I shall become a BAT!" - Batman #1 #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Neat. My (not so) inner fanboy is squealing in glee. I do hope to see more of this. Will Byakuya be dropping in for a visit? Are there any lingering effects of Amanda's quikening in Buffy? Keep up the great work.
Review By [Rubel] • Date [7 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Any chance of getting more chapters on this story any time soon? This is a very interesting twist on a YAHF, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Has Buffy retained any of Amanda's more interesting qualities? Xander's got a link to the sword that was created so the sword could be wielded while Xander wasn't in the driver's seat, how is he going to discover the soul blade is at least partially sentient? The two conflicting natures is probably from the remains of the Hyena possession. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
A new part will be out soon. I'm working on it now with my co-writer.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Dude your story is awesome, and I can tell that your next update is going to make a lot of people have a nerdgasm. A Zanpakuto in the real world that's going to be nuts his shikai release could be: SHINE WITH BRILLIANT LIGHT KUSANAGI!...or something totally cooler than that.
Review By [EarthDragon] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
In the words of Robin, "Holy Shitake Mushrooms Batman!" You've captured Byakuya perfectly... and the only thing I'm wondering, aside from what all your other reviewers have already said, is when you're going to update?
Review By [ReaperCB] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Not Rated
